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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Light Goddess" by Cloris Athena.]

“Light Goddess” is a story about perseverance, kindness, and the journey of realizing one’s potential and purpose. Ori, a young boy bullied and abused by his parents, is left with a very low opinion of himself and his abilities. With the death of his loving grandma, Ori is in great despair about how his life will unfold from here on, but what happens when he meets Florithena, the Light Goddess? How will his destiny unfold? What is in store for little Ori? Read “Light Goddess” by Cloris Athena to find out.

“Light Goddess” is a mix of magic and discovery. The book follows the life of Ori, a boy weighed down by the hardship of life. Ori is such a resilient character, as he never allows his situation to overshadow his love for music and playing the violin. Florithena, the Light Goddess, offers him a path toward transformation and self-acceptance. Set in a magical fairyland, the story is filled with different mystical beings and celestial melodies, from Sakura trees to divine intervention, all of which contribute to the lyrical and poetic ambiance of the book. Florithena’s presence brings warmth and hope to Ori, leading to one of the book’s most moving moments.

I so much love the writing style of this book, and that is one of the things that kept me engaged throughout. The author’s writing style evokes different forms of emotion, and this is done effortlessly. Sometimes I find myself so angry with some characters, and other times I am so happy with the turn of events. The scene of Ori justifying his parents’ love for him despite the suffering he endured is one of the many things that evoke strong emotions, and through these moments, the novel balances lyrical beauty with deep emotional connection. Ori’s grandma is a favorite character of mine, as her presence in Ori’s life enabled him to be kind and filled his life with hope.

However, despite the strengths of the book, reading it is a challenge because it leans more on describing elements and scenes, which makes the book feel too dense and slow-paced. Another thing I consider a downside is the presence of errors in the book; the errors affected my reading experience, especially at the beginning of the book, which shows that the book lacks proper editing and could benefit more from further refining to ensure clarity. As a result, I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars, deducting one star mainly for the errors in the book and the slow-paced progression.

To sum up, while “Light Goddess” by Cloris Athena succeeds in character development, some minor characters seem to serve more as plot devices rather than meaningful additions. The mystical beings in particular lack proper structure, making it difficult to fully understand them at times. Despite these issues, I will still eagerly recommend this book to readers who love poetic fantasy.

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This book sounds like what I would love to read, given the synopsis that describes the role of Ori in the book.

It’s disheartening Ori had to endure abuse from his parents and with the loss of the only person that truly cared for him, I wonder what fate has in store for him. This sounds like an interesting read.

This is a fantasy novel set in a world of magic which, however, is centered around a protagonist who experienced a very real type of hardship. His story of resilience can be inspiring, so I hope the author does at least proper proofreading. Thank you for your great review!

I am rooting for Ori. How terrible it must be to be abused and bullied by one's own parents. I am happy to know that Ori had a love for music and playing the violin. Music is therapy. I am curious about Florithina the Light Goddess.

Embarking on a journey through Cloris Athena's Light Goddess: Flower Sea is like stepping into a vivid tapestry where the ethereal beauty of the Flower Goddess Fairyland intertwines with the harrowing trials of its young protagonist, Ori. The narrative masterfully balances whimsical landscapes—snowy realms, blooming seas, and enchanted forests—with the profound struggles of a boy yearning to be a musician amidst a world rife with dragons and demons. Athena's storytelling invites readers to traverse a realm where art and magic coalesce, offering an experience that is both enchanting and deeply moving.

Looks like something I would like to read although the reviewer doesn't like slow paced progression it's something I look forward to. I'm anticipating to read this book

Ori’s journey of resilience and self-discovery sounds incredibly moving, especially with the emotional layers brought by his bond with his grandmother and the mystical guidance of Florithena. The blend of poetic storytelling and heartfelt character moments seems like it would leave a lasting impression, even if the pacing and editing could use some refining.

That is an excellent review. In this case it actually makes me realise that perhaps the book wouldn't be ideal for me, but that is part of what reviews are for!

I really love how you captured the emotional depth of Ori’s journey—it’s not just a magical tale but a powerful story of healing and self-discovery. Your reflection on the writing style and emotional swings really made me feel the heart behind the story.

I really do not like seeing children suffer, but that is the case of Ori, but like they say, once there’s life, there’s hope and seems like there’s hope for Ori as he encounters the light goddess. Find out what happens to Ori in this engaging read.

This is one of those books that can take you away from the harsh presence, the here and now. Although not for everyone, the 5/5 rating means that it will be enjoyed by many. The reviewer enjoyed it. I must admit, the front cover is very eye catching….

It's so difficult for me to read about children's traumatic experiences. I'm curious about whether the story is told in first or third person. The review was super helpful for at least being mentally prepared before picking it up.

Thanks for this clear and honest review. I like how you highlighted Ori’s growth and how his love for music stayed strong even through tough times. The emotional scenes, especially with his grandma and Florithena, sound powerful. It’s helpful that you mentioned the slow pacing and editing issues, too.

One can find a story about perseverance, kindness, and the journey of realizing one’s potential and purpose by reading the book "Light Goddess" by Cloris Athena. The story follows a young boy who left with a very low opinion of himself and his abilities.