What do you think about the title of the book?
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I trust Jeannie used that concept for a reason. Isn't it fascinating that the youngest gets to take the position of owning the title?
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Family ties sounds interesting. But I think it limits the plot to some extent.AnnOgochukwu wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:07 I think the title is suitable for the book. Although it might also be something like 'Family Ties' .
Kalayla is just okay.
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What do you think would be left out if Family Ties was chosen for a title?AnnOgochukwu wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:18Yeah, I agree with you. Besides, I doubt 'Family Ties' would encompass all the elements of this book.Sushan wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:13"Family ties" is a good alternative, but it will cut down the uniqueness of the book which is given by the current titleAnnOgochukwu wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:07 I think the title is suitable for the book. Although it might also be something like 'Family Ties' .
Kalayla is just okay.
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Honestly, I think Kalayla is responsible for triggering the other characters to make the book appealing.anoushka_thakur wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:56 I believe Kayala's essence is captured the most in the book and that she has connections with the rest. The book surely revolves around all three but I think Kayala has the most part.
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I agree the title is appropriate. Anyway, don't you find Kalayla's character a bit contemptuous when she addresses her seniors?Guda LM wrote: โ02 Sep 2020, 05:27 I believe it is appropriate, since the eleven-year-old is the youngest and the common factor between the other two ladies. Additionally, she is also the one who has gone through alot in a short period of time time and still has a alot of room to turn her life around. She is also both mature but still has a child side, basically she is the most profound of the three.
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Would it have been appropriate if Jeannie opted to name the book after Lena, who acts as a bridge between Maureen and her daughter?
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I think above the title, the artwork is what captured my interest.
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Could you have gone ahead to read the book if it had a different title but the same cover page?
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That is correct. She has ties with both the other women. Yet there is a large story excluding her character, and both he other women are protagonists of the story as well. So is it fair only to mention Kalayla in the book title?
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Joseph_ngaruiya wrote: โ04 Sep 2020, 14:03What do you think would be left out if Family Ties was chosen for a title?AnnOgochukwu wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:18Yeah, I agree with you. Besides, I doubt 'Family Ties' would encompass all the elements of this book.
Honestly, I'm not so sure. Perhaps it would remove the focus from Kalayla? What do you think?
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Yes, the cover is attractive.AntonelaMaria wrote: โ04 Sep 2020, 12:30 Kalaya is suitable name for the book. She connects all other character as the youngest and presents the future. I really like it! But more then that I love the cover.
That is correct. She connects all the characters. So she is more or less the center-piece of the story. Yet, I feel that it is too much to make her name the title of the book, since there is many more to the story. What do you think?
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Indeed, it would. The title of the book keeps the reader yearning to know what Kalayla is all about. Then after a few pages, the interaction she has with the different characters begin to capture the reader's attention. That's why the book is so gripping.AnnOgochukwu wrote: โ05 Sep 2020, 02:37Joseph_ngaruiya wrote: โ04 Sep 2020, 14:03What do you think would be left out if Family Ties was chosen for a title?AnnOgochukwu wrote: โ01 Sep 2020, 10:18
Yeah, I agree with you. Besides, I doubt 'Family Ties' would encompass all the elements of this book.
Honestly, I'm not so sure. Perhaps it would remove the focus from Kalayla? What do you think?
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I did not expect Kalayla to be 11 years old when I picked the book. My imagination was about a mature woman who had seen both sides of the world, the good and the bad. The twist that Jeannie used kept me loving the book from the first page to the last one. Yes, Kalayla fits perfectly.Arimart99 wrote: โ04 Sep 2020, 19:44 I find the name proper. She is the youngest and is the one who brought them all together. She is the main source of worry for the other two protagonists, she is like the glue holding them together, so why not name the book after her? Also, a different name might not be as intriguing.