We are Voulhire: A New Arrival Under Great Skies: Alternating Points of view
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Re: We are Voulhire: A New Arrival Under Great Skies: Alternating Points of view
I agree that the first person POV for Galen did not add much depth to his development, but it did help set him apart from the other POV characters as the main character.
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This is a good point. With all POV characters, the book didn't spend a lot of time developing some of them, especially Galen. Hopefully the rest of the series will make up for that and continue the development.ClaZig wrote: ↑03 Oct 2020, 22:33 Tysz alternates points of view beautifully, and this technique is really helpful in expanding our understanding of the plot. I feel like it also emphasized how complex the Voulhire society is. Nonetheless, the points of view were often too short, and that made it quite hard for me to fully grasp the character's perspective on some issues. In other words, I feel like switching points of view too often throughout the plot makes them a little superficial.
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It felt like first we were being guided through a world that feels ancient, magical, all-encompassing, to then be gently transported towards a narrative that is more emotional, more personal, more intimate to one person rather than the world.
One brought you closer to the characters, while another gives off a more epic fantasy being told around the fire vibe.
It added a multidimensional feel to this cosmic fantasy world that was interesting to read!
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True. And to a large extent the rest of the series did develop the plot. A New Arrival Under Great Skies, in my opinion, is mainly introductory and it leaves a lot of unanswered questions which serve to pique many readers interests in the series.Krista Ash wrote: ↑05 Oct 2020, 14:02This is a good point. With all POV characters, the book didn't spend a lot of time developing some of them, especially Galen. Hopefully the rest of the series will make up for that and continue the development.ClaZig wrote: ↑03 Oct 2020, 22:33 Tysz alternates points of view beautifully, and this technique is really helpful in expanding our understanding of the plot. I feel like it also emphasized how complex the Voulhire society is. Nonetheless, the points of view were often too short, and that made it quite hard for me to fully grasp the character's perspective on some issues. In other words, I feel like switching points of view too often throughout the plot makes them a little superficial.
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It makes sense that the rest of the series would develop the plot and characters significantly, especially since Tysz planned the series to be similar to a TV show with each book like an episode. The first episode/book's main purpose is to set the stage and draw the reader into the story.Marty_Kelly wrote: ↑05 Oct 2020, 16:08True. And to a large extent the rest of the series did develop the plot. A New Arrival Under Great Skies, in my opinion, is mainly introductory and it leaves a lot of unanswered questions which serve to pique many readers interests in the series.Krista Ash wrote: ↑05 Oct 2020, 14:02This is a good point. With all POV characters, the book didn't spend a lot of time developing some of them, especially Galen. Hopefully the rest of the series will make up for that and continue the development.ClaZig wrote: ↑03 Oct 2020, 22:33 Tysz alternates points of view beautifully, and this technique is really helpful in expanding our understanding of the plot. I feel like it also emphasized how complex the Voulhire society is. Nonetheless, the points of view were often too short, and that made it quite hard for me to fully grasp the character's perspective on some issues. In other words, I feel like switching points of view too often throughout the plot makes them a little superficial.
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