Abrupt Ending!

[Le-nic Pretorius]

Reading the comments and now I can't wait to read the rest of the books! Yes lord Eldus’ death felt unnecessary to me as well but seems it is relevant to what happens in the books.

[Mayang Bature]

Yeah. It just kind of reminded me of the first season of game of thrones. I don't know why but I actually expected an ending like that, alongside the escape of Meldorath. I'd love to see the justification for it in the next volumes.

[Jay David Randall]

What can you say about the swift death of a man with a wholesome character in this novel? Like for example in the new Lord of Hillport. I'm still hanging why a good man died without anything in defense in this book. It seems not fair.

Yes, I understand what you mean. I was deeply hurt by the demise of Lord Alderman. He had potential and a whole lot of story to tell in this novel, in my opinion, I would say.

[Mayang Bature]

Yeah, that ending was so sudden. I was sincerely hoping that some miracle would happen where the whole family would escape. Well, I believe the author has better plans in future books.

[Avishi]

Yes, it's unfortunate that a good man died. Good people are usually meant to die in most stories. Even so, it would have been nice if he was still alive.

[LS Daniyal]

The author developed such a wonderful and good character, Eldus, just to destroy him in the most brutal of ways at the end of the book. However, I noticed that Marshus, his son, was able to get away so this would be a huge factor in the rest of the series.

[Prodigy5]

The death of lord Eldus was unexpected for me, I felt bad but the story must go on.

[Adekeye Hassan musab]

Yes, his death was painful a lot, but I know his death would be a build into a greater character in his son. The book itself has a lot of dark undertone which doesn't actually make any character Sade from death itself. Eldus actually has a lot of potential if he had survived the attacked.