Official Review: Final Notice by Van Fleisher
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Re: Official Review: Final Notice by Van Fleisher
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Nicely written and informative review. 4/4 for you!
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In addition, I noticed a number of minor grammar errors -- comma faults, subject-verb number agreements, POV shifts, other issues. If the story had been more interesting I might chalk it up to a writer who needs a better copyeditor, but as is, it's just more trouble than I want to put up with. This writer clearly likes what he is doing -- I wish him the best in connecting with readers who are as interested in his topic as he is!
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