Official Review: Rosegrant by Jason Beam
Posted: 19 May 2020, 17:16
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Rosegrant" by Jason Beam.]
Horror novels are typically good for making readers think twice about the unknown, and Rosegrant by Jason Beam is no exception. This novel takes place chiefly in modern-day Oregon and follows the troubled life of Kelsie, a drug-addicted and lovesick teenager plagued with a tragic past. To protect herself, Kelsie has constructed a metaphorical glass shield around her mind that keeps her emotions and impulses in check. When the glass starts to shatter, nothing remains to hold Kelsie back from wreaking havoc on her town with an old book of witchcraft. Her rivals have no defenses against her wrath, and the town of Rosegrant will learn that their ancient demons have not disappeared; they have merely been lying in wait.
The premise of this novel had me jumping to snatch it up, and I tried desperately to like it. However, the book is filled to the brim with errors, both typographical and logical. Nearly every paragraph has some kind of spelling or punctuation error, and I take major issue with a good portion of the content.
The shock value of Rosegrant is unbelievably high, as the amount of gore, violence, sexual encounters, and profanity included would be tough to match. These factors all have their place but when overused can become tasteless, which is the case in this book. The story is so focused on shocking the reader that most of the elements that make up a good story are missing.
It is very problematic that a horror novel leaves nothing to the imagination. Readers are not trusted to make any deductions for themselves, so there is no sense of mystery, surprise, or even general creepiness. Every problem is solved quickly and easily with the most obvious solution. Because the story alternates between the third-person limited and the third-person omniscient point of view, the reader is inside every character's head and knows every secret.
I am also troubled by some logical real-world problems within the story that could have been amended with some research. For example, the police officers give out far too much sensitive information to locals when conducting an investigation. There is also a misconception about how tranquilizer darts work.
The setting is rarely described in detail and the pacing is nothing if not jarring. Sentences tend to be short and choppy, much like this excerpt from page 101: "The gym was a sacred place to him. He worked every muscle group. He just wanted to keep a perfect body."
Despite its shortcomings, there are several admirable points about this story. The author handles the concept of helplessness and terror skillfully, and the tension-filled relationship between two of the main characters feels realistic and engaging. Most characters are epitomes of various stereotypes, but the author allows them to maintain those characterizations in a way that does not feel particularly caricatured.
Because of the excess of errors and problematic elements, I give this book a rating of 1 out of 4 stars. I would recommend it to readers who are looking for a particularly gory experience. However, I would caution anyone with sensitivities to profanity or explicit sex scenes against it. It is also worth mentioning that those with religious proclivities may want to steer clear due to the overabundance of details concerning satanic rites and sacrifices.
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Rosegrant
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Horror novels are typically good for making readers think twice about the unknown, and Rosegrant by Jason Beam is no exception. This novel takes place chiefly in modern-day Oregon and follows the troubled life of Kelsie, a drug-addicted and lovesick teenager plagued with a tragic past. To protect herself, Kelsie has constructed a metaphorical glass shield around her mind that keeps her emotions and impulses in check. When the glass starts to shatter, nothing remains to hold Kelsie back from wreaking havoc on her town with an old book of witchcraft. Her rivals have no defenses against her wrath, and the town of Rosegrant will learn that their ancient demons have not disappeared; they have merely been lying in wait.
The premise of this novel had me jumping to snatch it up, and I tried desperately to like it. However, the book is filled to the brim with errors, both typographical and logical. Nearly every paragraph has some kind of spelling or punctuation error, and I take major issue with a good portion of the content.
The shock value of Rosegrant is unbelievably high, as the amount of gore, violence, sexual encounters, and profanity included would be tough to match. These factors all have their place but when overused can become tasteless, which is the case in this book. The story is so focused on shocking the reader that most of the elements that make up a good story are missing.
It is very problematic that a horror novel leaves nothing to the imagination. Readers are not trusted to make any deductions for themselves, so there is no sense of mystery, surprise, or even general creepiness. Every problem is solved quickly and easily with the most obvious solution. Because the story alternates between the third-person limited and the third-person omniscient point of view, the reader is inside every character's head and knows every secret.
I am also troubled by some logical real-world problems within the story that could have been amended with some research. For example, the police officers give out far too much sensitive information to locals when conducting an investigation. There is also a misconception about how tranquilizer darts work.
The setting is rarely described in detail and the pacing is nothing if not jarring. Sentences tend to be short and choppy, much like this excerpt from page 101: "The gym was a sacred place to him. He worked every muscle group. He just wanted to keep a perfect body."
Despite its shortcomings, there are several admirable points about this story. The author handles the concept of helplessness and terror skillfully, and the tension-filled relationship between two of the main characters feels realistic and engaging. Most characters are epitomes of various stereotypes, but the author allows them to maintain those characterizations in a way that does not feel particularly caricatured.
Because of the excess of errors and problematic elements, I give this book a rating of 1 out of 4 stars. I would recommend it to readers who are looking for a particularly gory experience. However, I would caution anyone with sensitivities to profanity or explicit sex scenes against it. It is also worth mentioning that those with religious proclivities may want to steer clear due to the overabundance of details concerning satanic rites and sacrifices.
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Rosegrant
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon