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Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 08 Dec 2022, 14:12
by Roy Nick
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "White's Tavern" by Jim Altfeld.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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In White's Tavern, Jim Altfeld brings into focus an old bar that accommodated all sorts of people: drug dealers, heavy drunkards, murderers, and other criminals, both ill and reformed. Beyond the dilapidated state of the tavern lay humorous dialogues, sarcasm, business plans (both legal and rogue), etc. We learn about Bill and how he served time when he was sixteen for the crime committed. Plus, we understand why he had an estranged relationship with his son.

Through dialogues, the author brings to attention how mobs died from shootings. Also, how money, relationships, or togetherness could buy you prestige and societal security. Earl owned the rickety tavern and made pocket change as profit. Thus, his wife insisted on leaving the ramshackle business for a new beginning. However, Earl was more than okay with tolerating messes and fights from the drunks and drug users. Did the tavern stand the test of time?

I loved how the book gave historical dates of events. For instance, the author would mention that one of the Touhy brothers was shot dead in 1929. Then there is information about the town’s traditions. In addition, we have the authenticity of the characters. They used profane language in each dialogue, like most local drunkards.

I enjoyed Bill's conversations and history. He served time and was not afraid of cops, fights, or a gun pointed at him. Petty confrontations and drunkards passing out after heavy drinking in the tavern were common. Even Earl did not mind the entire jumble. The regulars knew each other so well that no one cared when the other messed the floor with urine or vomit.

I didn't enjoy some scientific explanations about the earth and excerpts from different philosophers. Most were overwhelming and unnecessary. Hence, I rate White's Tavern 4 out of 5 stars. With that said, I only noted a few grammatical flaws. Therefore, it is well edited.

Since the legendary tavern is located in the Chicago area, you may think the happenings will go over your head. It's the exact opposite, where the explanations leave with an ideal picture of the small town and mobs. There's not too much of one element, be it sarcasm, family dynamics, or politics. Jim Altfeld maintained an okay pace in the plot, as the work is not action-packed or a crime thriller. Besides noting how ruining alcohol can be, there is an abundance of looking out for oneself because things can get ugly. I recommend the book to anyone interested in a fictional novel inspired by real-life events and places.

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Re: Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 20 Dec 2022, 01:55
by Grace Elkana
I think the historical accuracy of this book will make it worth the read. Every other aspect can find relevance around this fact.

Re: Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 23 Dec 2022, 05:42
by CrossK
In addition, we have the authenticity of the characters. They used profane language in each dialogue, like most local drunkards. Great book.

Re: Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 30 Dec 2022, 09:37
by Annas Felix
It takes a great deal of research to get your facts straight, especially dates of events that you didn't witness. I think the author excelled in that.

Re: Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 01 Jan 2023, 17:43
by Amy Luman
I don’t think that I’ll be reading this one. It appears that there are too many stories being told at the same time.

Re: Review of White's Tavern

Posted: 17 Jan 2023, 16:09
by NetMassimo
It's curious to see scientific and philosophical bits in this kind of novel. Realistic characters and settings are more like it and surely they're the strong parts of this novel. Thank you for your great review!