Review of Feeling Lucky
Posted: 18 Dec 2022, 18:47
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Feeling Lucky" by M.S.M. Barkawitz.]
Jackie and her girlfriend run scams on married men by sleeping with them, telling them that Jackie is pregnant, and using that to solicit money. However, her girlfriend Shannon is actually pregnant, and that is their primary source of income, seeing as Jackie makes barely anything from an unsuccessful acting career. Their latest job went off flawlessly, but the next one after that brings some unpredictable complications when their mark starts to get obsessive. Then the pandemic hits, bringing further complications and overwhelming Jackie in more ways than she can handle. She tries to pull through as obstacles, twists, and turns get thrown her way in Feeling Lucky by M.S.M. Barkawitz.
Character work is something Barkawitz has clearly mastered. Both Jackie and Shannon felt like real people with clear goals and motivations. Jackie especially, with her mysterious nature, her false names, and her past. She is a well-rounded character, and the author gets that across by putting her in varied situations that showcase the different aspects of her personality. She has a dichotomy about her, and the fact that you never really know how she’s going to react makes this a gripping thriller. The flashbacks that tell you more about her past were also wildly interesting.
The book is really easy to dive into; the opening scene is masterful and will set the tone for the rest of the book. There was also a sprinkling of humor throughout, which I found refreshing. I like Barkawitz’s attention to detail, especially with regard to the pandemic. It’s clear that a lot of effort was put into making sure the events lined up with real life, which added a significant amount of immersion.
I did have a problem with the prose, however. It was fast and clipped, which is a style I actually enjoy, but Barkawitz executed it in a way that led to spoon-feeding. The delivery of some character traits and narrative plot points was very overt, and I prefer my prose to be a little subtler than that. This means I can’t give Feeling Lucky full marks, but it’s still a solid 4 out of 5 stars.
If you’re going into this expecting a textbook thriller, you won’t find it here, but it will still thrill you. Barkawitz managed to come up with some twists that will knock you out of your seat and force you to turn the page. Note that this is a very adult book with very adult themes. That being said, I would recommend this to thriller readers as well as those who love character-driven stories. However, people who were significantly impacted by the pandemic might want to stay away for fear of reliving bad memories. Still a fantastic read.
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Feeling Lucky
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Jackie and her girlfriend run scams on married men by sleeping with them, telling them that Jackie is pregnant, and using that to solicit money. However, her girlfriend Shannon is actually pregnant, and that is their primary source of income, seeing as Jackie makes barely anything from an unsuccessful acting career. Their latest job went off flawlessly, but the next one after that brings some unpredictable complications when their mark starts to get obsessive. Then the pandemic hits, bringing further complications and overwhelming Jackie in more ways than she can handle. She tries to pull through as obstacles, twists, and turns get thrown her way in Feeling Lucky by M.S.M. Barkawitz.
Character work is something Barkawitz has clearly mastered. Both Jackie and Shannon felt like real people with clear goals and motivations. Jackie especially, with her mysterious nature, her false names, and her past. She is a well-rounded character, and the author gets that across by putting her in varied situations that showcase the different aspects of her personality. She has a dichotomy about her, and the fact that you never really know how she’s going to react makes this a gripping thriller. The flashbacks that tell you more about her past were also wildly interesting.
The book is really easy to dive into; the opening scene is masterful and will set the tone for the rest of the book. There was also a sprinkling of humor throughout, which I found refreshing. I like Barkawitz’s attention to detail, especially with regard to the pandemic. It’s clear that a lot of effort was put into making sure the events lined up with real life, which added a significant amount of immersion.
I did have a problem with the prose, however. It was fast and clipped, which is a style I actually enjoy, but Barkawitz executed it in a way that led to spoon-feeding. The delivery of some character traits and narrative plot points was very overt, and I prefer my prose to be a little subtler than that. This means I can’t give Feeling Lucky full marks, but it’s still a solid 4 out of 5 stars.
If you’re going into this expecting a textbook thriller, you won’t find it here, but it will still thrill you. Barkawitz managed to come up with some twists that will knock you out of your seat and force you to turn the page. Note that this is a very adult book with very adult themes. That being said, I would recommend this to thriller readers as well as those who love character-driven stories. However, people who were significantly impacted by the pandemic might want to stay away for fear of reliving bad memories. Still a fantastic read.
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Feeling Lucky
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon