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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Promise Of The Copper Scroll" by Alan Moss.]

The Promise Of The Copper Scroll by Alan Moss is categorized here as "C/T/M/H." The plot is straightforward: in July 2019, a minor earthquake reveals a hidden copper scroll within the ancient walls of a Qumran cave near the Dead Sea. This mysterious artifact soon finds its way to Professor Samuel Wadsworth, setting off a thrilling chase for untold wealth believed to have been concealed during the fall of the Second Temple in 70 AD. As Wadsworth deciphers the scroll's secrets, three determined women with unique motivations and backgrounds are drawn into a dangerous quest for the legendary treasure. Nancy Troll, a driven senior at Drexel University, Carol Stark, the resourceful assistant to Wadsworth, and Joan MacLennan, a resolute FBI Regional Chief, navigate a dangerous maze of terrorist threats and personal tribulations. Their intertwined fates and relentless pursuit of the scroll's treasure promise a gripping tale of ambition, courage, and survival.

What I liked most about this book was how the author balanced the present narrative with the destruction of the Second Temple in Jerusalem, which occurred almost 2,000 years ago. In some chapters, the author goes back to the past and introduces new elements intelligently so the reader is left wondering what happened. Doing this without confusing the reader and in a way that the tension and suspense continue to make the narrative enjoyable is complex, and Alan Moss managed to do it with merit.

The book has no notable flaws. I found only one grammatical error and couldn't find any plot flaws. Even so, I would have spent more time developing the psychological aspects of the Iranian antagonists. This approach would have made the book a bit more dense and intelligent, away from the cliché of evil and fanatical terrorists who want to attack the "good guys." That is a matter of personal taste, and I am sure many will prefer the book to be precisely how it was written. Therefore, I decided not to deduct points from the final score because of this.

Given the above, Alan Moss's novel has many good points and few flaws. It is an enjoyable read that will please fans of this genre. As mentioned in the paragraph above, the only point that could be improved is a matter of personal taste. Therefore, I decided not to lower the final score and give it 5 out of 5 stars. I can't imagine a fan of suspense and mystery not liking this work.

As mentioned above, thriller fans will enjoy this book. Although there is only minor profanity, the book does feature moderate sexual content and heavy descriptions of violence (such as decapitation), so I do not recommend it to anyone under the age of 18.

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The blend of historical intrigue with modern-day suspense in this book sounds compelling. I’m particularly curious about how the author balances the ancient and contemporary narratives while keeping the tension alive. The focus on strong female characters navigating this dangerous quest adds an intriguing dynamic to the story.

*The Promise of the Copper Scroll* sounds like a compelling blend of historical intrigue and modern adventure. I appreciate how the author effectively intertwines past and present narratives, maintaining suspense throughout. Your point about the portrayal of antagonists is insightful, suggesting there could be more depth. Overall, it seems like a well-crafted story that keeps readers engaged.

A thriller that puts together today's problems, starting with terrorism, and legendary relics from ancient times, can be very interesting. In this novel, the intertwining of past and present is used to create a story of great suspense. Thank you for your great review!

Promise of the Copper Scroll” by Alan Moss is an action-packed thriller revolving around a remarkable discovery narrative set in the Middle East. When a small earthquake in 2019 brings to the surface a strange copper scroll that was buried around the Dead Sea, it leads to a deadly race involving a Princeton professor, three ixiotnic women, and Iranian terrorists. It is alleged that the scroll contains directions on how to find a cache of Second Temple period treasure and so tangoes into an exciting game of cat and mouse.

The most prominent three characters are Nancy Troll, an ambitious student from Drexel University, Carol Stark, a low-paid clerk and in debt, and Joan Maclennan, an unyielding chief of FBI. As these women separately seek the scroll for various objectives, they keep coming across the threats posed by the Iranian operatives.

Complex characters inspire the readers as readers can easily relate to them and the setting characterization is exquisite. There is obsession, hostility, and a trait where many wished to be recognized and chased after wealth thereby placing the readers in the fast-paced heart-stopping beat of the novel.