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Review of Two Thighs To Every Story

Posted: 11 Oct 2024, 11:06
by Laney K
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Two Thighs To Every Story" by Steve A. Anderson.]
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3 out of 5 stars
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Two Thighs To Every Story by Steve A. Anderson follows the character of Sydney. She is a nurse with aspirations to grow in the medical field. She had met her husband, John, in college, and the two fell in love. John was a college athlete, though he always had a temper that did not improve with age. Problems arose in their marriage, such as difficulty conceiving a child and infidelity, which began to drive the two apart. As tensions arise, Sydney faces a difficult decision and soon must keep a dark secret to herself. What is Sydney's secret? Will she get a happy ending? Read Two Thighs To Every Story to find out.

The characters truly drive the story along. Sydney's passion drives her. From her desire to advance in her nursing career to raising her son, Ryan, she is determined to do her best in everything. Her life is filled with misfortune that leads her down a dark path, yet her motivations remain driven by passion. I appreciated how she remained true to herself throughout the whole novel. Her character was my favorite part.

At times, the writing style was a little repetitive. There was a lot of dialogue that didn't always feel natural. Anderson also utilized the same dialogue tags multiple times in a row at points, which made the writing a little dry. There were also editing issues throughout the book; it would benefit from additional proofreading.

I rate this book 3 out of 5 stars. The book, unfortunately, contained more than ten errors. It could use additional proofreading to be a more polished work. I thought the characters were engaging, and the plot moved along quickly, so I believe this book deserves three stars. If the book were to undergo additional proofreading, it would be worthy of a higher rating. I recommend Two Thighs To Every Story to fans of character-driven stories who enjoy themes of romance, family dynamics, sports, and more.

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Re: Review of Two Thighs To Every Story

Posted: 13 Oct 2024, 14:49
by NetMassimo
This is a thriller that seems to have good potential but is in need of more editing work to reach its full potential and do proper proofreading to prevent distractions while reading it. Thank you for your honest review!

Re: Review of Two Thighs To Every Story

Posted: 14 Oct 2024, 12:32
by Bethel Saint Bright
Marriage matters are very delicate. Sometimes, couples cave into pressure to do things that hurt them. The fact that Sydney struggled with conception opened the door to other issues, like infidelity. However, I'm curious to know what Sydney is hiding.

Re: Review of Two Thighs To Every Story

Posted: 15 Oct 2024, 11:19
by Cynthia Pence
Your review of Two Thighs To Every Story by Steve A. Anderson gives a balanced and insightful perspective on the book. The way you highlight the strengths of the novel, particularly Sydney's character, paints a clear picture of her determination and passion, which resonates as the heart of the story. Her journey through misfortune and her unwavering drive certainly seem to make her a compelling protagonist.

Re: Review of Two Thighs To Every Story

Posted: 28 Oct 2024, 13:21
by Nneka Bridget
"Two Thighs To Every Story" explores Sydney's struggles with her career and marriage, highlighting her determination amidst personal challenges. While character-driven stories often appeal to me, I note that it has received some criticism for repetitive dialogue and editing issues. Sounds intriguing for those who enjoy complex relationships and family dynamics.