What do you not like about the book

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What do you not like about the book

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I detested some of the characters. Although I liked some other things about the book particularly the sensitivity it brought to my mind. What do you detest about the book
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Basically, the profanity levels, guess that's just my perspective. Although I understand, coming from the writer's POV.
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I was enjoying the thrill in the book and the sex scenes did not excite me. I couldn’t wait to be done with the vivid scenes the author created.
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Suky_Joseph wrote: 22 Sep 2022, 06:11 I detested some of the characters. Although I liked some other things about the book particularly the sensitivity it brought to my mind. What do you detest about the book
Found it a bit slow in some places. That's what I did not like about it.
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The errors in the book are what I do not like about the story. The story has a good plot but the errors in it were too many and disturbed me from enjoying the story.
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Want I don't like is the killings of the abnormals because it was not there fault to be like that. They would have look for means to help them than to kill them.
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The fact that the book is filled with lots of profanities irks me. I honestly don't approve of those "curse words" they are inappropriate. Also, the first-person language that they use to address each other is another thing. I didn't quite like the style of writing used.
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I agree with your point. I found some characters quite unlikable. Other than that, I think the book is good.
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While I liked the book in general, the chapter that went over all the characters backstories when they were sitting on the train. I think it would be more helpful to spread them out as each new character was introduced.
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I like all the characters in the book but what I detest is the numerous profanities and the number of errors found in the book.
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