OK I have to go through my annotations to see if I picked up on “furry” rather than “fury.” That cracked me up! Maybe it was fixed before I got there - but I am totally tempted to check. And I’m with you that the frequency of callouts served as a distraction, especially when they had formatting issues, as happened for me at least once when reading with Kindle.Bradley Twesten wrote: ↑16 Feb 2024, 12:11 Kudos to those that offered some critique. Too many "It was perfect" comments. I found some editing errors. "Furry" gave me a good laugh when "fury" was the intended word. Clearly opposite emotions evoked by the difference in those two words.
I didn't care for all of the callouts. In the Kindlebook version, nearly every screen shot had the emphasized callouts. It broke up the flow too much. I wanted to get through the book without the constant distraction.
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