Do you think the characters in "Deceptive Calm" by Patricia Skipper are well-developed?
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Re: Do you think the characters in "Deceptive Calm" by Patricia Skipper are well-developed?
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This is a great point to make! It's disappointing when the characters aren't on the same level as the plot, as it leaves the story feel rather underwhelming and like the author left something on the table.Faith Williamson wrote: ↑22 Aug 2024, 12:21 I believe that the characters were well developed, although I believe that they could have done better as the book had such a strong plot.
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I couldn't agree more. I felt the story moved too quickly and that character development was lost in the race to the end.mgriesmar wrote: ↑03 Sep 2024, 18:30 No, I did not think the characters were well-developed at all. The author just moved through the events of their lives without telling us much about their inner thoughts, feelings, or motivations. There was too much information about their daily lives and not enough information about their inner lives. For example, why did we need to know so many details about Trisha's job? I also thought we were given too much information about some of the side characters. I don't care that the surfing officer's wife is pregnant! It was just overwhelming and distracting, and took away from what could've been the development of Vanessa.