Won't pay think I'm AI generating, and haven't read the book. Ripoff!

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I am unsure what I am supposed to write at this point. I have purchased and read the whole book. It says that I cannot use spoilers at all so I am stumped on what I can say about the actual story. Vanessa is a light skinned black female whoe grows up in an orphanage raised by sister roesalie (roe) in charleston sc setting starts in 1968. Vanessa is best friends with Trisha throughout the whole book from her being in high school throughout the end of the book. She dates Barry at the beginning of the book till he has sex with her and she finds out he has a girlfriend. She ends up pregnant and ask his dad for an abortion as Barry's dad is a doctor but it is illegal during the time period to get one so she goes to a nasty apartment blindfolded with Trisha and gets one almost dies then she works at college in the media department or whatever they called it. She decided to use the fake birth certificate and social of a dead white baby to transfer to California. She ends up working on KPIX. Meets to tod von westerkemp he is white and pursues Vanessa who is not attracted to his pail skin color. Ends up marrying him. Tod's parents don't like her, tod gets her pregnant, finds out she's black tries to kill her, Trisha and the toddler who's name is Brett. They end up driving off a cliff into the ocean Trisha saves them Vanessa and trish and the baby hide with nuns, vanessa is at a hospital with her sick baby. The police try to find out what happened to them as they are pronounced dead and Trisha sister doesn't believe this. One of the police finds Barry ask for his help. Barry helps he ends up in the hospital injured, Vanessa ends up at the hospital to see Barry they are still in love he says he won't leave her again. So yes I did read the entire book and it seems like yall just don't want to pay the money I've submitted 3 reviews corrected and added to them as asked this is completely ridiculous. At this point why not just tell me how you want it written.

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