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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" by Vivienne Fine.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal by Vivienne Fine is a fast-paced romance novel. Ava was still struggling to get over her ex-boyfriend when she met a handsome guy, Carter, on a night out. After a one-night stand, she bumps into him again at a work function, and Ava learns that Carter is a billionaire. However, he is afraid that unless he gets married, he won't receive his inheritance. Carter decides to ask Ava if she will pretend to be his fiancee in exchange for a large payout once his inheritance is secured. Will Ava accept Carter's offer? Will the feelings sparked by their night together get in the way of the potential arrangement?

Ava is a wonderfully written character. From trying to establish herself as a jewelry designer to fighting for a possible promotion at work to trying to sort out her feelings for Carter, Ava had a passion and bold determination to succeed. I found this to be refreshing as often characters in romance novels are rather one-dimensional. I did not find this to be true of Ava at all. She was full of life, and that kept me engaged because I was able to connect with her and see her grow.

I will say that the ending of the book did seem a little rushed. I feel as though it could have been expanded upon a bit without slowing down the pacing too much. This is the only part I disliked about the book.

Overall, I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars. I enjoyed all aspects, except for the pacing in the latter half of the book. Had that not been the case, I would have given this book full marks. I was also quite impressed with the editing; I did not notice a single error while reading. This book is perfect for adults who are looking for a spicy, short romance novel. It can easily be read in one sitting, given its length and the speed at which the plot moves along. Given the sexual content, it is not suitable for those under the age of 18.

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"Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" appears to be an interesting romance. I would like to read about the character Ava, but then I hope the author looks into the complaints noted about the ending of this novel.
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"Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" by Vivienne Fine offers a fast-paced romance with a relatable and dynamic protagonist, Ava, who strives for success in both her career and personal life. Ava's multi-dimensional character adds depth to the story, although the ending felt somewhat rushed. The absence of errors in the editing is commendable. This short, spicy romance is best suited for adults due to its explicit content and can be enjoyed in one sitting due to its engaging plot and brisk pacing.
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Great review. I don't often see romance books on here, and particularly not of the spicy variety. I will have to keep a lookout for this one.
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Laney K wrote: 19 Sep 2023, 15:52 [Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" by Vivienne Fine.]
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Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal by Vivienne Fine is a fast-paced romance novel. Ava was still struggling to get over her ex-boyfriend when she met a handsome guy, Carter, on a night out. After a one-night stand, she bumps into him again at a work function, and Ava learns that Carter is a billionaire. However, he is afraid that unless he gets married, he won't receive his inheritance. Carter decides to ask Ava if she will pretend to be his fiancee in exchange for a large payout once his inheritance is secured. Will Ava accept Carter's offer? Will the feelings sparked by their night together get in the way of the potential arrangement?

Ava is a wonderfully written character. From trying to establish herself as a jewelry designer to fighting for a possible promotion at work to trying to sort out her feelings for Carter, Ava had a passion and bold determination to succeed. I found this to be refreshing as often characters in romance novels are rather one-dimensional. I did not find this to be true of Ava at all. She was full of life, and that kept me engaged because I was able to connect with her and see her grow.

I will say that the ending of the book did seem a little rushed. I feel as though it could have been expanded upon a bit without slowing down the pacing too much. This is the only part I disliked about the book.

Overall, I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars. I enjoyed all aspects, except for the pacing in the latter half of the book. Had that not been the case, I would have given this book full marks. I was also quite impressed with the editing; I did not notice a single error while reading. This book is perfect for adults who are looking for a spicy, short romance novel. It can easily be read in one sitting, given its length and the speed at which the plot moves along. Given the sexual content, it is not suitable for those under the age of 18.

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on "Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" by Vivienne Fine. Your review provides valuable insights into the book's strengths and areas for improvement.

It's clear that you found Ava to be a well-developed and multidimensional character, which added depth to the story and allowed you to connect with her on various levels. This is certainly a refreshing aspect in romance novels, as you mentioned.

Your feedback about the rushed ending is noted, and it's constructive to suggest that expanding upon it slightly could have enhanced the overall reading experience.

Your four-star rating and praise for the editing quality indicate your overall positive impression of the book, with the exception of the pacing in the latter half. Your comment about the suitability for adult readers due to sexual content is helpful for potential readers to know.

In conclusion, your review offers valuable insights for those considering reading "Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal." It highlights the engaging aspects of the book while providing constructive feedback for improvement
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your review is amzazing
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I can't thank you enough for taking the time to write such a thoughtful and positive review.
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Laney K wrote: 19 Sep 2023, 15:52 [Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal" by Vivienne Fine.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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Forbidden Billionaire's Fake Proposal by Vivienne Fine is a fast-paced romance novel. Ava was still struggling to get over her ex-boyfriend when she met a handsome guy, Carter, on a night out. After a one-night stand, she bumps into him again at a work function, and Ava learns that Carter is a billionaire. However, he is afraid that unless he gets married, he won't receive his inheritance. Carter decides to ask Ava if she will pretend to be his fiancee in exchange for a large payout once his inheritance is secured. Will Ava accept Carter's offer? Will the feelings sparked by their night together get in the way of the potential arrangement?

Ava is a wonderfully written character. From trying to establish herself as a jewelry designer to fighting for a possible promotion at work to trying to sort out her feelings for Carter, Ava had a passion and bold determination to succeed. I found this to be refreshing as often characters in romance novels are rather one-dimensional. I did not find this to be true of Ava at all. She was full of life, and that kept me engaged because I was able to connect with her and see her grow.

I will say that the ending of the book did seem a little rushed. I feel as though it could have been expanded upon a bit without slowing down the pacing too much. This is the only part I disliked about the book.

Overall, I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars. I enjoyed all aspects, except for the pacing in the latter half of the book. Had that not been the case, I would have given this book full marks. I was also quite impressed with the editing; I did not notice a single error while reading. This book is perfect for adults who are looking for a spicy, short romance novel. It can easily be read in one sitting, given its length and the speed at which the plot moves along. Given the sexual content, it is not suitable for those under the age of 18.

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I enjoy reading spicy romance books a lot, especially when the female characters are amazing. Your review is compelling. It makes me want to read this book. Hopefully, I will be able to do so soon.
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I'm a fan of spicy romance novels, especially ones where there is a potential arrangement between the main characters. This book will definitely go on my bookshelves as a must-read!
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