Official Review: I'll Steal Your Heart by Dee Cass
Posted: 31 Aug 2020, 18:35
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "I'll Steal Your Heart" by Dee Cass.]
I'll Steal Your Heart, written by Dee Cass, is a story about gaining independence and falling in love. Izzy lives on a large and profitable ranch with her overbearing and sometimes vicious father. She meets Mark at the cattle market. They actually don’t really meet, just kind of notice each other. She is blonde and beautiful, and he is all man and pure chiseled marble. Ends up he is the new owner of the ranch next door, and they will eventually meet again.
But Izobelle’s father considers her his property. No one is good enough for his daughter. He has never let her date anyone, not even when she went to college. She has been sheltered way too much and Izzy is starting to rebel. She wants and craves some independence, and nothing is going to stop her. She wants to experience love, and all the world has to offer her.
There were so many grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors in the book that it was really distracting. This book was never edited at all. I lost count after 20 in the first 10 percent of the book. There were way over 100 mistakes. I was itching to edit this book. It has so much promise for a romance novel. If the author is reading this, I will be glad to help. This book needs to be polished up before anyone else reads it.
There were some things I disliked about the story, besides the errors. Even though Izobelle is inexperienced and a virgin, she doesn’t know much about sex. I mean, she is living on a ranch, and it is 1984. So that part was a little too corny and didn’t make much sense at all. Also, Izzy doesn’t seem to have any friends at all, even though she has lived on the ranch her entire life.
Now for the good things about the book. The erotic parts were “just right.” Not too much, and not too little. Every so often you just need a little mindless smut to get you through your day. Even the amount of cursing in the story was “just right.” Sometimes too much cursing completely destroys a story.
Due to the significant number of errors, I have no choice but to rate I’ll Steal Your Heart, written by Dee Cass, 2 out of 4 stars. Once it is thoroughly revised, I would gladly rate it 4 stars. Even with the number of errors, the story was a great romance novel. This story is pure romance novel and will appeal to readers of this genre.
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I'll Steal Your Heart
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I'll Steal Your Heart, written by Dee Cass, is a story about gaining independence and falling in love. Izzy lives on a large and profitable ranch with her overbearing and sometimes vicious father. She meets Mark at the cattle market. They actually don’t really meet, just kind of notice each other. She is blonde and beautiful, and he is all man and pure chiseled marble. Ends up he is the new owner of the ranch next door, and they will eventually meet again.
But Izobelle’s father considers her his property. No one is good enough for his daughter. He has never let her date anyone, not even when she went to college. She has been sheltered way too much and Izzy is starting to rebel. She wants and craves some independence, and nothing is going to stop her. She wants to experience love, and all the world has to offer her.
There were so many grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors in the book that it was really distracting. This book was never edited at all. I lost count after 20 in the first 10 percent of the book. There were way over 100 mistakes. I was itching to edit this book. It has so much promise for a romance novel. If the author is reading this, I will be glad to help. This book needs to be polished up before anyone else reads it.
There were some things I disliked about the story, besides the errors. Even though Izobelle is inexperienced and a virgin, she doesn’t know much about sex. I mean, she is living on a ranch, and it is 1984. So that part was a little too corny and didn’t make much sense at all. Also, Izzy doesn’t seem to have any friends at all, even though she has lived on the ranch her entire life.
Now for the good things about the book. The erotic parts were “just right.” Not too much, and not too little. Every so often you just need a little mindless smut to get you through your day. Even the amount of cursing in the story was “just right.” Sometimes too much cursing completely destroys a story.
Due to the significant number of errors, I have no choice but to rate I’ll Steal Your Heart, written by Dee Cass, 2 out of 4 stars. Once it is thoroughly revised, I would gladly rate it 4 stars. Even with the number of errors, the story was a great romance novel. This story is pure romance novel and will appeal to readers of this genre.
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I'll Steal Your Heart
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon
