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Raw by Belle Aurora

Posted: 17 Mar 2014, 20:24
by Cmason
Let's be honest, I'm a sucker for an angry, sexy protagonist, and this one hits the spot!! However, the heroine of the story is a bit dull, naive, and unrealistic, especially for someone that's lived on the streets for a year; making it hard to connect with her character. The plot was interesting enough to keep my attention; I didn't skip any pages, but the writing is rushed, clipped, and under developed. The descriptive writing is simple; too much telling and not enough showing. On the brighter side, an ending can make or break a book, and this book won me over with the ending alone!! Though a bit rushed, it was unexpected and actual.

Re: Raw by Belle Aurora

Posted: 18 Mar 2014, 17:20
by Tayla
You say it won you over. Dose that mean you recommend it or is it not really worth it to read? You gave your opinion yes, but what is it about? Why did you find it dull and unrealistic? I'm new to this so others might disagree but I suggest you write more this doesn't really explain anything. I have never heard of this book and Would like to know about it. Write about the gist of what the book is about AND your opinion. I might be wrong in suggesting this since I am new to this but that's what I do.:/