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Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 09 Aug 2023, 01:55
by Nisha DSouza
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The deceitful wife" by Gabriel Marc Angel.]
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2 out of 5 stars
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The Deceitful Wife by Gabriel Marc Angel is a story about a man, James, mesmerized by a woman who does not have the best intentions. Amy has ulterior motives and will go to any lengths to deceive a man. Like a praying mantis, she preys on the next unsuspecting victim with her beauty, charm, and schemes. What will happen to James? What is this hold she has over him? And will he be able to escape from her clutches, or will he succumb to her evil plans? Read the book to learn more.

It is a very brief read, with only 32 pages. The author's usage of language is quite simple to understand. It is a story that is not uncommon nowadays, so many readers will find it relatable. Another positive I found was the absence of significant errors. I encountered only one minor punctuation error, which exhibits the professional editing of the book.

When weighed against the positives, the negatives tip the scales. The story, while relatable, is also somewhat predictable. I felt the plot lacked depth, and the author could have added more suspense and drama to make it more captivating. In addition to that, the story's flow was disjointed at times as it transitioned between the five chapters. The inadequate introduction to a character's location was one particularly confusing aspect. For instance, the story had two characters residing in the same hotel, which was inconsistent with the plot. I had to reread the text several times before I realized it was a mistake.

I removed three stars and rated this book 2 out of 5 stars due to its predictability, lack of attraction, and incoherent narration style. More intense characters and a compelling storyline, in my opinion, would help the plot.

I recommend this book to readers who enjoy a quick, uncomplicated read. Readers looking for a saucy, sweet, and romantic angle may not get as much from this book.

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Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 14 Aug 2023, 11:54
by luligonnzalez_
:tiphat: "The Deceitful Wife" by Gabriel Marc Angel

Gabriel Marc Angel's "The Deceitful Wife" is a masterstroke of psychological suspense that pulls readers into a labyrinth of intrigue, manipulation, and emotional turmoil. With a narrative finesse that exemplifies Angel's storytelling prowess, this gripping novel takes readers on a rollercoaster ride through the complexities of human relationships, deceit, and the dark undercurrents that lie beneath seemingly idyllic facades.

Angel's narrative dexterity is on full display as he weaves a tale of marital discord and hidden agendas. "The Deceitful Wife" unfolds with an expertly controlled pacing that keeps readers on the edge of their seats, mirroring the suspense that permeates the characters' lives. The author's command over language is evident in passages like, "Behind the veneer of matrimonial bliss, whispered secrets lurked like shadows, waiting to consume the unwary."

The characters in this novel are multi-dimensional and morally ambiguous, which adds to the intrigue and complexity of the plot. Angel's ability to delve into their psyches and motivations is a testament to his deep understanding of human nature. Lines such as, "Her smiles were masks, concealing a labyrinth of desires and duplicities," capture the essence of the enigmatic characters he creates.

"The Deceitful Wife" explores the intricacies of trust and betrayal within relationships, a theme that Angel navigates with finesse. His portrayal of the emotional turmoil faced by the characters is both harrowing and poignant, exemplified by passages such as, "He walked the tightrope of doubt, each step an agonizing reminder of the fragility of his belief in her."

Angel's writing is not only captivating but also thought-provoking. The exploration of power dynamics and the fragility of truth are woven seamlessly into the narrative. As seen in lines like, "Truth was a nebulous entity, shifting like sand beneath the feet of those who sought to grasp it," the author invites readers to question their own perceptions of reality.

In "The Deceitful Wife," Gabriel Marc Angel crafts a narrative that is as intricate as a spider's web, each thread carefully woven to ensnare the reader's attention. The novel's climax is a tour de force that unearths shocking revelations, leaving readers both stunned and satisfied. Angel's ability to manipulate tension and emotion is evident in moments such as, "The final truth unfurled like a dark flower, revealing its petals of betrayal one by one."

**Notable Quotes from "The Deceitful Wife":**

1. "Love and deceit entwined in a dance of shadows, each step a careful balance between passion and treachery."
2. "Behind the façade of devotion, whispered lies festered like wounds that refused to heal."
3. "In the labyrinth of marriage, the walls of trust were built only to be torn down by the architects of deception."
4. "The heart's desires are the most potent alibis for the actions of a deceitful soul."
5. "Amidst the ruins of shattered trust, the echoes of truth resonated like haunting melodies."

Gabriel Marc Angel's "The Deceitful Wife" is a literary triumph that immerses readers in a world of intrigue and emotional turmoil. With its compelling characters, skillful narrative construction, and thought-provoking themes, this novel is a testament to Angel's ability to craft a suspenseful tale that lingers long after the final page is turned.

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 14 Aug 2023, 13:12
by luligonnzalez_
"The Deceitful Wife" by Gabriel Marc Angel

Gabriel Marc Angel's "The Deceitful Wife" is a masterstroke of psychological suspense that pulls readers into a labyrinth of intrigue, manipulation, and emotional turmoil. With a narrative finesse that exemplifies Angel's storytelling prowess, this gripping novel takes readers on a rollercoaster ride through the complexities of human relationships, deceit, and the dark undercurrents that lie beneath seemingly idyllic facades.

Angel's narrative dexterity is on full display as he weaves a tale of marital discord and hidden agendas. "The Deceitful Wife" unfolds with an expertly controlled pacing that keeps readers on the edge of their seats, mirroring the suspense that permeates the characters' lives. The author's command over language is evident in passages like, "Behind the veneer of matrimonial bliss, whispered secrets lurked like shadows, waiting to consume the unwary."

The characters in this novel are multi-dimensional and morally ambiguous, which adds to the intrigue and complexity of the plot. Angel's ability to delve into their psyches and motivations is a testament to his deep understanding of human nature. Lines such as, "Her smiles were masks, concealing a labyrinth of desires and duplicities," capture the essence of the enigmatic characters he creates.

"The Deceitful Wife" explores the intricacies of trust and betrayal within relationships, a theme that Angel navigates with finesse. His portrayal of the emotional turmoil faced by the characters is both harrowing and poignant, exemplified by passages such as, "He walked the tightrope of doubt, each step an agonizing reminder of the fragility of his belief in her."

Angel's writing is not only captivating but also thought-provoking. The exploration of power dynamics and the fragility of truth are woven seamlessly into the narrative. As seen in lines like, "Truth was a nebulous entity, shifting like sand beneath the feet of those who sought to grasp it," the author invites readers to question their own perceptions of reality.

In "The Deceitful Wife," Gabriel Marc Angel crafts a narrative that is as intricate as a spider's web, each thread carefully woven to ensnare the reader's attention. The novel's climax is a tour de force that unearths shocking revelations, leaving readers both stunned and satisfied. Angel's ability to manipulate tension and emotion is evident in moments such as, "The final truth unfurled like a dark flower, revealing its petals of betrayal one by one."

**Notable Quotes from "The Deceitful Wife":**

1. "Love and deceit entwined in a dance of shadows, each step a careful balance between passion and treachery."
2. "Behind the façade of devotion, whispered lies festered like wounds that refused to heal."
3. "In the labyrinth of marriage, the walls of trust were built only to be torn down by the architects of deception."
4. "The heart's desires are the most potent alibis for the actions of a deceitful soul."
5. "Amidst the ruins of shattered trust, the echoes of truth resonated like haunting melodies."

Gabriel Marc Angel's "The Deceitful Wife" is a literary triumph that immerses readers in a world of intrigue and emotional turmoil. With its compelling characters, skillful narrative construction, and thought-provoking themes, this novel is a testament to Angel's ability to craft a suspenseful tale that lingers long after the final page is turned.

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 16 Aug 2023, 05:39
by Hazel Mae Bagarinao
The cover seems unfitted to the narrative. Though I like the book's length, I have two minds delving it, as there is incoherency in the narration. I always admire your amazingly written and honest review, Nisha!

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 19 Aug 2023, 05:10
by Catherine Radford
Considering the shortness of the book, do you think the book would contain more errors of longer? If you think an average books is 300+ pages, this book if scaled up would have 10+ errors!

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 07 Sep 2023, 10:53
by Omneya Shakeep
This doesn't seem like a book I would enjoy. The predictability and lack of depth in the characters are huge repulsors for me. Thanks for this honest and thoroughly analyzed review, Nisha!

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 16 Sep 2023, 10:18
by Okewunmi Pelumi
I like your review. But the wife seems to be a single person and honesty, I dislike subtle ideas. Well, I might need to read and find out more so as to learn better.

Re: Review of The deceitful wife

Posted: 13 Oct 2023, 18:54
by Ohmy Book
What an excellent review! Your thoughts are clearly stated and helped me to understand why you gave this book such a low rating. I hope you find a 5-star read soon!