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Feedback on my newest articles on poverty blog
So if you have a few minutes please try reading through my newest article I just published on my World Hunger and Poverty Blog: Sacrifice
If you don't mind all the reading, you can also check out the other article I link to at the bottom of that one, Unhappy and Unsatisfied.
Then, give me some some feedback. It's not a big deal but if you could keep the feedback about the ideas or points in the articles in comments on those articles at the blog and then use this topic here at Online Book Club to post feedback about my writing itself as in like technical feedback, feedback about the style including feedback about structure or grammar and so on. Constructive criticism is most greatly appreciated.

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I can't fault you on your writing style. It read well. Those kinds of pleas, if you will, are best written more in the tone of a letter, I would say, since you are attempting to draw the reader's heart into the message. That, you did very well.