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"My name is Dolfox, and i have come to give you an urgent message from the ether world; where Queen Menusha your majesty resides.
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Queen Menusha! Queen Menusha! Brineesha shrieks, That's my MOTHER! how did she find me? What is her urgent message? She babbles in a strange language as Brandon stands by dumbstruck.
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The noise slowly grew louder and louder. She screamed and covered her hears as the piercing noise forced her to fall to the floor screaming. Suddenly the door of te wardrobe burst open, the windown shattered and the light globe exploded in a shower of sparks. Black smoke filled the room, and the girl passed out as her airways closed and her heart fluttered to a stop.
So many books to read, so little time..
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