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The light's intensity began to pulse and grow, until suddenly a shadowy figure began to develop, as if it was transgressing from another dimension.
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She couldn't grasp what was going on around her as one second she was terrified and in the next along with the light and the warmth came a peace she couldn't describe.
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As her fingertips began to tingle and the light grew brighter, Brineesha shielded her eyes from the ever growing light that seemed to envelope her.
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Suddenly, a sonic boom exploded from the source of the light, and knocked her off her feet.
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She collided with the mini robot and they both slammed into the wall next to her closet door, smashing the robot to pieces and knocking Brineesha out cold.
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Dazed, Brineesha lifted her hand to touch the ever swelling knot on her head and looked around nervously at the tiny room she found herself in.
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Her head was pounding and was forced to sit back down when she tried to stand. "Sorry about that. Didn't mean to cause you harm" said a gentle voice coming from the corner of the room.
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"I have not the time to explain as much I would like," it said. "But you must listen very carefully to my instructions."

Brineesha could see the wispy figure ahead in the crystal light and blinked at its incongruity.

"You are to find a book. Once you have that book, you must give it to me. No resistance and no dallying. Do you understand?"

Brineesha nodded, somewhat puzzled by the softness of its voice.

"The book is called Veritum. Go to the deepest part of the light and bring it back!"

The wisp disappeared, leaving only the light.
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"Wait! Crap." Brineesah sat there trying to understand. "The deepest part of the light? What the heck does that mean?" Once again she stood, this time slowly, and looked around the room. Hmmm... Veritum, I'll have to look that up
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Brineesah strongly doubted the wisdom of obeying the orders of a (sort of) disembodied voice, but her curiosity compelled her to do so. 'Well', she thought wryly. 'I must be crazy. If this kills me, it's going to be my own fault.' However, first, she had to find a way out of the room.
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She discovered a acute hole on the side of the closet and got sucked in.... with the robot,mysteriously!

-- Tue Dec 02, 2014 12:40 pm --

Anyone else?

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Anyone else?I am curious of someone's continuation of my last sentence.

-- Tue Dec 02, 2014 8:12 pm --

Does anyone want to give any more suggestions?I would like to know what someone would add to my sentence above.
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Her eyes opened to a swirling white mass of crystal and glitter. It was as if every snow white fantasy in the world had come to exist in this place. Piles of it, shimmering with an otherworldly glow in a white so brilliant it should have blinded her. Instead, she could see every tiny grain and glimmer of each snow flake that fell. She stood and turned in a circle, finally noticing the walls that surrounded this mystical place. A gasp escaped her. The walls were made up entirely of...
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The wall was made of solid,block-hard ice,oh no she was trapped with absolutely no air and no way out,so she decided to..
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She took a deep breath, hoping it wouldn't be one of her last, and began to search through the large piles of snow. Instead of freezing wet cold, it felt like she was digging through piles of cotton soft sand. Her hand struck something that was...
Somewhere out there is a world we never knew existed.

Languages never spoken.
Colors that should not be.
Lives never opened.
Eyes that never see.

And then the page is turned, a universe created.

We are gods.
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...warm and moving slightly. She moved her hand along the wiggling thing, slowly sweeping off the strange cottony snow. Finally, the robot emerged.
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