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It stared with unblinking eyes straight into her face.She was terrified and..
When all think alike, no one is thinking very much.
— Walter Lippmann
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whispered "why me?"
Somewhere out there is a world we never knew existed.

Languages never spoken.
Colors that should not be.
Lives never opened.
Eyes that never see.

And then the page is turned, a universe created.

We are gods.
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It said: "coz."
"Reason is intelligence taking exercise. Imagination is intelligence with an erection" -- Victor Hugo.
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Her eyebrows drew down and she glared at the robot. "You have sucked me out of some hole into this icy cube where I am going to suffocate and that is all you can say?" She drew back her foot to give the robot a nice good kick.
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The robot just kept staring at her face to 'face' and slowly Brineesah started to feel like she was losing control of her body, mentally and physically.
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Suddenly she was mesmerized by its penetrating gaze and was sucked into a mental void. She could no longer feel her arms and legs and her chest began to heave. The sensation was familiar, but she couldn't name it.
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Suddenly a moment of clarity hit. She had suffered through this many times as a child. Black outs, seizures, they had never been able to put a name to it.
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She was knocked out cold and on the floor until...
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She awoke and realized that it was absurd for all these strange things to have happened successively within a story and decided to write her own. Lost in thought for what seemed like a certain amount of time, she finally wrote:
"Reason is intelligence taking exercise. Imagination is intelligence with an erection" -- Victor Hugo.
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There was once a old lady who was said to be witch and suddenly,one day she just disappeared....
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from there she continued to write her story with such angst and everything was flowing perfectly.
*The truth doesn't always hurt*
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Until she realized that she hadn't thought about where the first "turning point" would come. She sat and thought for hours until finally, tired and hungry, she began to plot the story. And then ...
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She threw the pages against the wall and went to get a sandwich. A chocolate ice cream sandwich. With sprinkles.
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And for the first time in years she was happy. Having finished the ice-cream she went back to the pages she threw against the wall and tore them into pieces.
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But there was someone outside her ice chamber looking,watching,spying on her, then....
When all think alike, no one is thinking very much.
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