Feedback on my newest articles on poverty blog
Posted: 25 Apr 2014, 10:31
I have just recently been dipping my toes back into writing again. I don't mean fiction, but I like to write essays and articles and things like that.
So if you have a few minutes please try reading through my newest article I just published on my World Hunger and Poverty Blog: Sacrifice
If you don't mind all the reading, you can also check out the other article I link to at the bottom of that one, Unhappy and Unsatisfied.
Then, give me some some feedback. It's not a big deal but if you could keep the feedback about the ideas or points in the articles in comments on those articles at the blog and then use this topic here at Online Book Club to post feedback about my writing itself as in like technical feedback, feedback about the style including feedback about structure or grammar and so on. Constructive criticism is most greatly appreciated.
Thank you!
So if you have a few minutes please try reading through my newest article I just published on my World Hunger and Poverty Blog: Sacrifice
If you don't mind all the reading, you can also check out the other article I link to at the bottom of that one, Unhappy and Unsatisfied.
Then, give me some some feedback. It's not a big deal but if you could keep the feedback about the ideas or points in the articles in comments on those articles at the blog and then use this topic here at Online Book Club to post feedback about my writing itself as in like technical feedback, feedback about the style including feedback about structure or grammar and so on. Constructive criticism is most greatly appreciated.

Thank you!