Chain Story!

Anna · Post by **Anna** » 04 Feb 2009, 23:20

Hi!

This is a chain story. I'll begin by writing a few sentences. Feel free to continue to add onto the story with your own couple of sentences, allowing the next person to continue where you left off.

The Story:

Andy continued to drive, with seemingly no end to the monotonous, rocky desert around. He sighed loudly. What had compelled him to drive all this way? He could no longer understand himself. Hang on...what was that on the road ahead? Andy gasped. "No. It can't be!" It was....
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Old Man Nudist

blue_doona32 · Post by **blue_doona32** » 06 Feb 2009, 12:03

It was a line of men and women standing in the middle of the road. Andy punched the brakes to the floor, hoping that he'd stop in time before hitting anyone. Ceramic pads slid across the tires, the friction causing them to slow down. Andy was still going too fast, so he turned the wheel and came to a jolting halt. He climbed out of his used sub-compact and went up to the woman in the center of the line, giving her a once over.

"What the hell are you doing?"he screamed. "Who are you people?!"

"I am," she started...

yollyP. · Post by **yollyP.** » 08 Feb 2009, 22:45

I want to give my contribution to continue this chain story but was afraid I might ruin the good beginning...

so I'd rather be a "reader"...might start in the middle...soon...Just dropping by.

christy · Post by **christy** » 13 Feb 2009, 13:46

forum seems to be giving me some hard problems in seeing the attached images. None the less I am sure it's just a temporary thing, probably a small bug.

lyndon.baptiste · Post by **lyndon.baptiste** » 03 Jun 2009, 19:46

"I am Sueling," she stuttered. "Please help us..."

She collapsed and as if they were dominoe pieces that had been tapped by an invisible forefinger, the rest began to fall, wailing like banshees as they collapsed. The earth began to tremble and when Andy scanned the horizon, a treacherous...

ceve4life · Post by **ceve4life** » 08 Jun 2009, 19:38

...figure appeared. The burning red sun setting behind the person sent chills up Andy's spine as he could not make out the shadow face. The mystery person stood cloaked and unmoving...then said, "...

andr70 · Post by **andr70** » 28 Jul 2009, 04:32

" could you tell me where the pharmacy is over there?I have a terrible...

yuri · Post by **yuri** » 22 Apr 2014, 08:46

Have you ever seriously got involved in a chain writing project?
What was your experience of it?

npandit · Post by **npandit** » 22 Apr 2014, 10:37

"--headache."

Andy swore loudly. His head was spinning. This wasn't right--he was sitting in a doctor's office--across the desk, his legs kicked up on the desk was his psychiatrist.

"My head--" he continued.

"Another vision?" The doctor peered at him shrewdly.

"It just came to me...a group of men and women--then they vanished, then some demonic figure--I can't figure out what it is, it's a little different every time."

"And you've been having these visions since...?"

Andy looked into the doctor's face, his vision slowly coming back to focus; his breath came out in uneven gasps--as he registered his present, the familiar, dingy office--his torn, faded jeans...

And trying to ignore the piercing pain inside his head, Andy tried to remember.

debbie smith · Post by **debbie smith** » 26 Apr 2014, 13:57

"Why am I here? What has happened?" As he focused more on the present, trying to ignore the pain in his head, Andy looked into the eyes across the desk and realized ... this was not his doctor, this was the man in his dream. He had to leave. Slowly starting to rise, eyes on the impersonator .....

Nikkidavis · Post by **Nikkidavis** » 20 May 2014, 17:07

He said, "I'm going to go to the bathroom."
Andy walks out of the office and down the hallway, picking up speed as he gos along. he looks back at the door to the office and, since he sees no one there, he begins run. Out the door he gos when he realizes he is not in the real world, but in . . .

Alexandra Bayer · Post by **Alexandra Bayer** » 20 May 2014, 17:50

...his vision. The demonic figure had projected these images into his mind, making him see things that weren't truly there. Andy looked around at the desert surrounding once more. His eyes widened as he saw...

debbie smith · Post by **debbie smith** » 20 May 2014, 20:01

Sueling sitting in his car. But the car was different somehow...."what the...." It was shimmering in the air like a mirage but so real....so ready to fly away... Andy runs toward the car as Sueling flings the door open and reaches out to pull him in. As he jumps through the door he glances back at the figure and sees.....

CrescentMoon · Post by **CrescentMoon** » 20 May 2014, 20:57

Sueling! The building Andy just left turned into a glass structure. Sueling was banging her fists, screaming and pounding on the door, desperately trying to get out. The door was locked and she was trapped inside. Andy gasped, horrified, and slowly turned his head to face the imposter, dreading who it could be. His eyes locked on the angry gaze of...

debbie smith · Post by **debbie smith** » 20 May 2014, 21:47

his doctor's receptionist holding a wand pointed straight between his eyes. Stunned, Andy realized he was not alone in the waiting room. From somewhere behind him he heard a low growl as the receptionist....