Official Review: Crazy DeJa Vu by Lauresa Tomlinson

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Re: Official Review: Crazy DeJa Vu by Lauresa Tomlinson

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Meg98 wrote: 14 Jul 2019, 22:42 Oh dear. This one sounds like it missed the mark on a lot of elements. It is a shame that it didn't flow well throughout. Thanks for your honest, great review!
Thank you very much for your kind words. :)
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LinaMueller wrote: 15 Jul 2019, 08:49 I hope the author keeps improving her writing and gets a better editor. Thanks for your revealing review.
I hope so too. The premise sounds quite promising. Thank you for stopping by. :)
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Thank you for that honest review. It’s so disappointing when a book doesn’t meet standards. It sounds as though it could have been a really good story about Rita if only numerous factors were fixed! It just doesn’t work when a storyline keeps changing and the characters are unrealistic.
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janelwhite wrote: 17 Jul 2019, 16:44 Thank you for that honest review. It’s so disappointing when a book doesn’t meet standards. It sounds as though it could have been a really good story about Rita if only numerous factors were fixed! It just doesn’t work when a storyline keeps changing and the characters are unrealistic.
I agree. The book had the potential to be so much more. Thank you very much for commenting.
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