Official Review: Raven by Sue Loh
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Re: Official Review: Raven by Sue Loh
The editing was definitely quite well done. I was very happy with that part of the book. Thanks!Dannyphery wrote: ↑29 Apr 2020, 15:22 I commend the author for a job well done on the editing.
Sounds like a nice book.
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A glossary might have been helpful, especially for all the computer terms. Thanks so much for stopping by!Adanna Inya wrote: ↑29 Apr 2020, 17:19 It's very important to use the simplest of terms when writing. Better still, create a glossary that people can consult, because not everyone is conversant with your field.
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It's still a good book. There just might be some sections that you don't quite understand. Hope you enjoy.FEislandqueen13 wrote: ↑01 May 2020, 07:50in spite of the technical language, I have an itch to read this book.
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A glossary could have been useful. Nevertheless, it was still a great book, and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.Kanda_theGreat wrote: ↑01 May 2020, 23:11 It appears as though the book lacked a glossary for the "technological terms" . However, I'm glad that the author created an interesting plot that is easy to follow.
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This might be right up your alley. It definitely was interesting, even if I didn't understand it all. Thanks!Frances019 wrote: ↑03 May 2020, 15:20 This book looks interesting and since I am interested in computers I wouldn't mind looking up all the jargon. I know what "denial of service" means, it's an attack where a server get contacted so many times it becomes sluggish and crashes. I have no idea what "raid arrays" are though. Good review!
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