Official Review: Yellow Beard & The Curse Of The Bloo...

Drakka Reader · Post by **Drakka Reader** » 17 May 2020, 09:22

I am not a fan of horror in the first place, and I dislike pointless stories as well, so I suppose I'll skip this one because it possesses nothing that I would read.

Thank you for the review!

Khadezatul Kobra · Post by **Khadezatul Kobra** » 17 May 2020, 09:23

Bad luck this time that the Yellow bread characters couldn't fly over readers mind. Best of luck for the next.

LinaJan · Post by **LinaJan** » 17 May 2020, 09:24

It's a shame that what sounds like an interesting premise did not get developed well enough. The review is certainly very constructive and informative, thank you!

Ivona R · Post by **Ivona R** » 17 May 2020, 09:25

I like books that serve as social commentary. It's a pity this one wasn't executed differently. I like the idea though. Thanks for the honest review.

Leonidas Ndeta · Post by **Leonidas Ndeta** » 17 May 2020, 09:27

The horror theme sounds interested on video play but all in all the story could come out well without the errors. Great review though.

Tan TR · Post by **Tan TR** » 17 May 2020, 09:28

This doesn’t seem to be my type of book, but it is a shame that the story and characters weren’t developed better. It sounds like it has a lot of potential.

Gaby_Gabs · Post by **Gaby_Gabs** » 17 May 2020, 09:37

The facts that the characters were unrealistic, and that the yellow beard is more of a gruesome ghost story, it seems like stories that children or adults who want to escape reality should read. The the grammatical errors and poor punctuation marks show a lack of effective communication; such errors should be worked upon.

moowshiri · Post by **moowshiri** » 17 May 2020, 09:38

The book sounds quite interesting. The Yellow Beard sounds like a character I would love to meet in the book. Nevertheless, the grammatical errors mentioned are too glaring to be ignored. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Alya17 · Post by **Alya17** » 17 May 2020, 09:42

I love supernatural stories so it’s unfortunate that the book requires professional editing. I also dislike “heavy handed” monologues. It makes it difficult to take the stories seriously. Great review!

DragonLight877 · Post by **DragonLight877** » 17 May 2020, 09:44

I don't think I'm interested in a bunch of gory ghost stories. And with all the other errors mentioned, I think I'll pass on this one as well.

molivas24 · Post by **molivas24** » 17 May 2020, 09:46

I am huge fan of ghost and horror stories. However, due to the fact that you mention way too many grammatical and proofreading errors, I am going to give a hard pass to this book. Especially if it seems to be necessary to re-read certain parts just to understand the story. Thanks for the review!

Bles · Post by **Bles** » 17 May 2020, 09:50

Yellow Beard & The Curse Of The Bloodline by Lawrence V Webster seems like an amazing book. I do love short stories but unfortunately I will have to skip this. However, I will recommend it. Congratulations to the author on the BOTD. Great review.

Nelson Chocha · Post by **Nelson Chocha** » 17 May 2020, 09:51

The book seems interesting despite the poor organization of stories. Few books really appreciate the after_Life. I hope the author will check out this review it is a tool for improvement.

Erick Muyesu · Post by **Erick Muyesu** » 17 May 2020, 10:00

At the start of your review, you really got me thinking about how this book is gonna be entertaining. However, when you started highlighting the wrongs in the book, I got disappointed. I just hope the author works on some of the errors to make the book better. Congratulations on BOTD.