Review of The Mystery of The Hillside Motel
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Re: Review of The Mystery of The Hillside Motel
I guess it's really hard to capture kids' voices once one stops being one.Unfortunately, there are a few issues with the book. The first is that the story seems off for kids who are eight years old. The way the kids talk, the things they think about, and the relationship between David and Teri match kids that are eleven or twelve or even older. It doesn’t fit kids that are only eight. Another downfall is that there are a few inconsistencies. There are times when something is said at the beginning of the book, but then a contradictory statement is said later on. For example, when they get to the motel, it seems like they are still far from their grandparents’ house, but then David tells Teri that their grandparents live in the area.
But I actually love the paranormal/romance mix in here! There's something super exciting about young love and first adventures. Thank you for your honest review.
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