Official Review: Pepperoni Pizza Pinching chimps

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Official Review: Pepperoni Pizza Pinching chimps

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Pepperoni Pizza Pinching chimps" by Tracey C Ayres.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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Pepperoni Pizza Pinching Chimps by Tracey C Ayres is a fictional book about some mysterious kidnappings of several pizza delivery boys. This story contains plenty of suspense, which makes this book a thriller. The writer’s tone is conversational and casual, as dialogue is common in the text.

The story begins with a teenage girl named Keah, who is awakened by a knock on her door. A pizza delivery boy asks her if she ordered some pizzas, but she tells him that he has the wrong house. She looks through the spyhole of her door, and she notices that the boy disappears into the darkness. The next morning, some detectives come to her house to question her, but she reveals no information to them about her encounter. She speaks about her experiences to her friend, Abby, and a boy named Fart also joins their conversation. When walking back home after visiting her sister, Keah enters an abandoned building that used to be a theater. She explores it by going up the stairs while it is raining outside. When descending the stairs, her bag is caught somewhere, but she thinks someone is after her, so she runs outside and returns home.

This story was fun and exciting to read. Firstly, the plot is very humorous, which makes the tone in the text light-hearted and fun. Moreover, the novel is structured chronologically and rationally, allowing the reader to clearly comprehend the events unfolding in the story. What I liked most about this book was that it had plenty of suspense and tension, making this book an engaging and interesting thriller.

Nevertheless, there were also disadvantages to this novel. In particular, there were numerous grammatical mistakes in this book, hence it has not been professionally edited. What I disliked most about the text was that it was unrealistic, as some of the events described did not match with a real-life scenario. In turn, this removed the sense of authenticity from the story.

This book is best suited for young adult readers who like science fiction thrillers. Young readers will relate to the young characters in the story, while they will also likely enjoy the suspense in the text. Both atheists and religious readers can read this book freely.

To conclude, I rate this book with 2 out of 4 stars. I did not give it lower because it was fun, well-structured, and exciting. I could not give it a higher score due to its unrealistic plot and its grammatical errors.

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Post by Victor Jerry I »

Kidnapping of delivery boys is some what crazy. I love the fact that the author left us with a lot of suspense. Nice review by the way.
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This book seems like an amazing mystery and suspense thriller that will keep me glued to it till the end. Thanks for your well detailed review.
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I love the storyline of this book. It sounds like a thinking read. Nice review!
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This is a criminal story of book. Storytelling started kidnapping a pizza delivery boy. This is a mistery books and how found the missing boy and why he a kidnap. When you read a book 📚📖📖 every page 📄 is amazing and must to read on start to the end.
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Post by Kenesha Latoya Fowler »

I'm surprised that there was no mention of chimps anywhere in the review, given the title and cover of the book. It's a shame about the errors, though. I hope they will get resolved with a good round of editing. Thanks for your helpful review.
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Post by ShiRah185 »

It seems like an awesome story. But I got chills when I found out that Keah decided to explore an abandoned theatre alone. Great review.
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