Review of Mama's Deadly Secret
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Review of Mama's Deadly Secret
Mama's Deadly Secret is a fantastic book by Karon Curtis. This book comprises fourteen chapters. Karon skillfully takes the reader on a journey to her imagination. She tells the story of Payton, a seventeen-year-old boy. Payton is the dream guy; he is a sportsman, and he is good with the ladies. Things start to take a turn when Payton notices the weird but familiar presence of Officer Brown around him. He was alarmed when this officer applied for and got a job at his workplace. One day, after a weird conversation, he asked Payton to send his regards to his mother.
Meanwhile, Payton's parents, Mr. and Mrs. Watson, have been receiving crank calls of late. Although Mrs. Watson has an idea of who the caller might be, she feels it is best not to tell her husband anything. Her fears are confirmed when their daughter, Paris, invites Randy, who she met at 8 ball, to their house. Payton finds it troubling that this particular man has been the man following him around. He decides it is time to confront him. However, Randy has a golden envelope with him, which contains the biggest shock of Payton's life. Does Payton discover Randy's identity? Does he find out what connection his mother has with this strange Officer Brown? You would have to read this exciting book to get the answers to these questions and more.
This book has numerous positive aspects to it. Karon started this book in a simple manner; she told this story in such a skillful way. I must commend the author for the plot development as well. Initially, it felt like this would be the usual high-school story of butterflies and love. However, events that unfolded afterward took me by surprise.
Furthermore, the author realistically portrayed the characters; for instance, Payton's refusal to do anything sexual with Chloe because he was distracted by the thoughts of the girl he liked, Tiffany, seemed quite natural. It would have felt otherwise if he could quickly move on and make out with another girl after finding out that Tiffany had a boyfriend. Also, I enjoyed the lesson on friendship which the author portrayed with the way Payton and his friends were always looking out for each other. This book promoted other values such as loyalty; for instance, Tiffany's refusal to kiss Payton because she was already in a relationship. I found minimal errors in this book; it was professionally edited and made reading it a lot easier.
Nevertheless, this book had its negative aspects too. The author's description of particular events felt empty, shabby, and without emotion; for instance, the championship's final game was described in a few lines. I anticipated a thrilling final; although the author attempted to portray it like this, I was not impressed by the narration. Also, some characters went MIA after playing prominent roles at the beginning. For instance, Trey was quite noticeable initially; however, it felt like he disappeared and was only mentioned once after that. I kept wondering what he was up to; I mean, he is in the team that won the championship, and he was always hanging out with his friends at 8 ball, but he was not mentioned again in these places until they won the championship. The last negative aspect of this book is that it felt like the author sympathized with paternity fraud. With the recent surge in paternity fraud cases, I was surprised when Eric claimed Payton was his child even when he had the evidence of a DNA test in his hands. Instead, he shredded the result and declared that Payton was his son without confirming his claims. This could lead to unrealistic expectations because most people get shattered emotionally by things like this. If people were to expect a reaction similar to Eric's, then it might cause some issues.
All in all, this book was excellent. I enjoyed every bit of it. The author made me laugh, worry, feel sad, feel worked up, and so on. This is an example of mastery at its best despite this being the author's first book. I rate this book four out of four stars. I could not get myself to give it anything less because this is a well-written story. I recommend this book to people who enjoy romance fiction. Also, people who love books about teenagers would enjoy this one too.
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