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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Legend of the Copper Cyborg" by J Hawk and L Hawk.]

What do a teenage girl and two wolf dogs have in common? How about a hyena dog and a copper cyborg? They all happen to be players and characters in a real-life video game. When technology becomes too powerful, it isn’t possible to completely control it. In fact, it has the potential to take over. In The Legend of the Copper Cyborg by L. Hawk and J. Hawk we meet Kelsi, a normal pre-teen who likes to spend her free time playing video games. One cold, wintery day she gets transported into a living video game. From that day forward, she spends all her time with her teammates getting ready for the next challenge. Will she and her team succeed in winning it all and reaching their final goal? Or will something, or someone, stand in their way?

I enjoyed many things about the book The Legend of the Copper Cyborg by L. Hawk and J. Hawk. Firstly, I think the authors did a fantastic job making the book exciting and hard to put down. Secondly, it has diverse characters and interesting villages. Lastly, the characters are well-developed, and their emotions and interactions are very realistic.

As wonderfully interesting as the book is, there is one thing that I did not like. There are many errors in the book, such as punctuation, wrong words and verb tenses, spelling mistakes, wrong pronouns, and missing words. For example, the author uses effected instead of affected in the first chapter. The mistakes didn’t make the book impossible to read, but they did cause some confusion.

Unfortunately, I must rate The Legend of the Copper Cyborg 4 out of 5 stars. If there hadn’t been so many grammatical errors, I would have given it 5 stars. I look forward to the next book.

I recommend this book to all ages. There isn’t anything inappropriate in it and it is a delightful book to read.

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The Legend of the Copper Cyborg
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I was wondering how she could get out of that game. will she? I want to know what her journey would be. It's good to hear that this book contains exciting and interesting characters and notions. I will give it a try. Thanks for the review.

It has a very interesting story. Reading about adventures inside a video game would be fun. Your review is great and I like your thoughts about it. Thank You!

Thank you for your insightful review of The Legend of the Copper Cyborg by L. Hawk and J. Hawk. I appreciate your praise for the exciting storyline, diverse characters, and realistic interactions. While the errors you mentioned caused some confusion, they didn't hinder your overall enjoyment of the book. Keep up the great work!

A girl who loves gaming being inside the game? I wonder how Kelsi would feel about that. If I were her, I'd be ecstatic, if the challenges aren't too dangerous or difficult. Was she the only human that got transported into the video game, or did her teammates face the same dilemma? I'll find out for myself.

The feedback on the review of "The Legend of the Copper Cyborg" is positive overall. The reviewer praises the book for being exciting and captivating, making it difficult to put down. They appreciate the diverse characters and interesting villages portrayed in the story, as well as the realistic emotions and interactions between the characters. However, the reviewer expresses dissatisfaction with the numerous grammatical errors present in the book, including punctuation, verb tenses, spelling mistakes, and pronoun errors. They mention an example of a specific error to illustrate their point. While the errors didn't make the book unreadable, they caused some confusion. Despite the errors, the reviewer still rates the book 4 out of 5 stars, stating that it would have received a higher rating if not for the grammatical issues. They recommend the book to readers of all ages, emphasizing its appropriateness and delightful nature.