Book Review? The barganing
Posted: 20 May 2016, 19:27
Before I begin, I would like to apologize because this is my first post, and I don't quite know what I am doing.
The Barganing is a book by Carly Anne West, and probably needs a bit more editing then it currently has. I felt this was a great book in general and really seemed to draw me in. (I was up till 1:00 am.) It has a bunch of page turners, but has grammer mistakes throughout it. There is this one part in it that had a scene change, but there was nothing to mark it was a scene change. No markings, or new paragraph. This was a very confusing moment, and there was more then one of those. Besides a few beginer mistakes, this was a book I would recommend, and definitely read again.
The Barganing is a book by Carly Anne West, and probably needs a bit more editing then it currently has. I felt this was a great book in general and really seemed to draw me in. (I was up till 1:00 am.) It has a bunch of page turners, but has grammer mistakes throughout it. There is this one part in it that had a scene change, but there was nothing to mark it was a scene change. No markings, or new paragraph. This was a very confusing moment, and there was more then one of those. Besides a few beginer mistakes, this was a book I would recommend, and definitely read again.