Review of Eliza's Story

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Review of Eliza's Story

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Eliza's Story" by Maggie Bain.]
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5 out of 5 stars
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Eliza, a five-year-old girl, just wants to be loved and cuddled like other kids her age, but it seems those wishes are unattainable, given the way things have continued to turn out in the orphanage home where she lives, in the moments she tried to share with other inmates at the orphanage, and in her days at school. She has a disorder that has brought her those cold treatments, which her young mind cannot fathom. Will she ever discover what is wrong with her? Will she ever enjoy any of these basic essences of life and living: love and acceptance?

Eliza's Story is a children's story written by Maggie Bain, and I did enjoy reading her moving narration of Eliza's inner struggles and aspirations. I could feel those psychological tortures that come with feeling "compressed" by society or friends and wanting to break free and enjoy the fullness of life. Yeah, the dominant thematic preoccupation here is Eliza's battles with Down's Syndrome, but the lessons therein have wider global relevance and implications. I think this was the aspect of the book that interested me most; I was a victim of circumstances, and I am familiar with some of Eliza's inner concerns.

Another striking theme in this story is the bearing societal values have on the lives and destinies of people. Eliza could have most likely not had it so tough if her mother had had the chance to make a choice. In addition, the invaluable sacrifices of humanitarian institutions like orphanage homes are highlighted so profoundly that I had to take some time to reflect on the essential activities of these institutions and organizations, which so many people never had the time to think about.

The story was well illustrated. The illustrations aptly offered pictorial interpretations of some important incidents in the story. Eliza herself is an inspirational figure. Her high emotional energy and positive view of life, despite the disturbing happenings in her life, are encouraging. For example, she kept learning how to tie her shoelaces, undeterred by the mockery from people.

I am delighted to rate this book five out of five stars because of the universal relevance of its messages. Also, it was thoroughly edited and well illustrated. I didn't dislike anything in this book, so there is no reason to rate it lower. Readers between three and nine years old should have a memorable experience with Eliza's Story.

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The book is so interesting
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Post by Umesh Bhatt »

The review is indicating that the psychology of a child is very well taken up in this book and her want for love and affection is described very effectively by the author. Would love to go through the book.
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This sounds like a very deep and complex book for children. Would it be too much for children as young as 3?
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This is really a very good story I love it
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Post by Maduabuchi Okwiya N Eze »

Catherine Radford wrote: 16 Jul 2023, 01:56 This sounds like a very deep and complex book for children. Would it be too much for children as young as 3?
It shouldn't. But then it might be helpful to have an adult explain to the kid the importance of remaining positive and undeterred by the negative opinions of bullies.
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Post by Kebun Bunga »

The feedback on the review for "Eliza's Story" is overwhelmingly positive, acknowledging the moving narration and the author's ability to capture Eliza's inner struggles and aspirations. The reviewer appreciates how the story goes beyond the theme of Down's Syndrome and delves into broader lessons with global relevance. The societal impact on individuals' lives and the importance of humanitarian institutions like orphanages are highlighted and provoke reflection. The illustrations are praised for effectively complementing the story and providing visual interpretations. Eliza's inspirational character, her high emotional energy, and her positive outlook on life despite adversity are commended. The review concludes with a perfect rating of 5 out of 5 stars, emphasizing the universal relevance of the book's messages, the thorough editing, and the lack of any dislikes. The recommended age group of three to nine years old adds valuable guidance for potential readers.
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I'm continually amazed by the struggles of others and their efforts to overcome them. When these struggles involve children I even like them more. Thanks!
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I appreciate how the reviewer acknowledges the wider relevance and implications of Eliza's battles with Down's Syndrome, reminding us of the importance of compassion and acceptance in our society.good review.thanks.
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"Eliza's Story is a captivating novel that takes readers on an emotional journey of resilience and self-discovery. With beautifully crafted characters and a compelling narrative, it explores themes of love, loss, and the power of human connection. This heartfelt tale will stay with you long after you turn the last page."
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Your review indicates that societal customs creates barriers that eventually harm people, and I couldn't agree less. Thanks for the detailed review.
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After reading this review, I honestly need to read this book. This is a very detailed and thoughtful review. Thank you for this.
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Post by Seetha E »

Touching review! I have found books in this genre to be very touching and full of emotions. There is so much cheer, sadness, love and care. Reminds me of watching kids' movies with my little daughter and having a tear in at the same time. It is so heart warming that even kids at the ages of 3 and 5 can feel the intensity of a scene of a situation with the same joy or pain. Nice review!
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