Review of Ryan Daniels: Good Night, Firefly
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Re: Review of Ryan Daniels: Good Night, Firefly
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I also think the use of parentheses may be too advanced for the age demographic this is aimed toward. It's fine to elongate the sentences.
There are also a few general grammatical issues that make the reading a little stiff.
Otherwise, this is a cute story that could help kids that are going through resisting sleep.
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It will be a helpful tool for parents grappling with children with bed-resisting attitudes. that's not all, it is a useful tool for kids who are learning to read; the magical aspect is an impetus to a child's reading interest.
Ryan Daniels has done a good job.