Review of Our Champion

PeterRabitt20 · Post by **PeterRabitt20** » 13 Dec 2021, 21:47

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Our Champion" by Alexander K Lynne.]

4 out of 4 stars

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Karen and Cathy have only one wish for Christmas: They yearn for a puppy. When their wish comes true, the two sisters grasp valuable lessons like how to pick the right breed for their family. Eventually, the girls’ hard work pays off when Alex, the German Shepherd, comes into their lives. They learn more about compassion, teamwork and taking care of a puppy.

Written by Alexander K. Lynne, Our Champion: Alex The German Shepherd is a sweetly illustrated story about love and responsibility.

Two positive features stood out and became favorites of mine: the theme and the illustrations. Lynne did a thorough job of explaining the responsibility of caring for a pet. The story broke down the magnitude of the work needed for the little ones. I was especially worried during Alex’s pool scene which created a bit of suspense; fortunately, it teaches children that animals do get sick.

The illustrations are drawn by Stefanie T. Geyer. The first page features an image of an actual German Shepherd: He could be the real Alex. The most important aspect is that none of the drawings are repeated or “copy-pasted”—I have a problem with that. Thankfully, Geyer kept her work unique and fresh. Alex, Karen and Cathy are in constant action, such as playing in the snow and brushing their teeth. I also enjoyed seeing Alex grow throughout the story.

Lynne's writing style isn’t striking, but it is functional and gets the point across. In its simple way, it is enough to reach the targeted audience which ranges from ages 5 to 9—probably. The vocabulary would be no problem for the upper tier. However, some younger readers may need help with words, such as “temperament” and “concentrated”.

For cosmetic purposes, the format could use some improvement. I disliked the tiny font which strained my eyes. In addition, the Kindle Could Reader didn’t have an option to increase the size. Also, the paragraphs seemed scrunched close, without a line separating them. In all fairness, I didn’t try the tablet version.

Overall, I rate Our Champion: Alex The German Shepherd 4 out of 4 stars. The one dislike I had didn’t seem enough to dock a star. Plus, this little tail was enjoyable. Also, the book seemed to be professionally edited with a few minor errors.

I recommend this book to new pet owners. It would make a great side gift to accompany a canine gift. The plotline is light; therefore, I wouldn’t recommend it to those wanting a story with many conflicts and adventures.

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Our Champion
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Mmaduabuchi Eze · Post by **Mmaduabuchi Eze** » 16 Dec 2021, 16:25

The theme of love and responsibility covered in this book is a critical reminder to the very values needed to ensure a continuous human co-existence. Like Karen and Cathy, we are born into this world with a tender heart filled with love and care. Unfortunately, this tender heart is soon stiffened by inordinate desires. We have to learn a lesson from this children story.

Post by **Lucy Vera** » 16 Dec 2021, 23:15

An amazing book with excellent themes. It's nice if children. I think the values discussed in this book are necessary in impacting positive values in the upcoming generation.

Ellylion · Post by **Ellylion** » 17 Dec 2021, 05:47

I lovely book that would teach kids about team-work and love toward animals! Could be a great gift for little ones this festive season

Thanks for a great review!

Ruchi Raina · Post by **Ruchi Raina** » 17 Dec 2021, 15:13

Karen and Cathy seem very cute and sweet. Their wish is to have a puppy and when they do, they learn admirable qualities like compassion, teamwork, etc. Thanks for the awesome review!