Review of Jeremiah's camp out
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Review of Jeremiah's camp out
Jeremiah’s camp out by Inez MccClenton is about four boys who have their alone boys' time. On a beautiful Saturday morning, two boys, Malachi and Jeremiah, wake up eager to camp and seize big fishes from the pond. They hurriedly enjoy their breakfast and erect their tent, where they would spend their time.
But camping time is no fun without friends. Eddie joins the duo, and Raheem does so a little later. They need several supplies, and Jeremiah's mom is there for that. Because they’re underage, Uncle Willie decides to accompany them to the camping site. Join them as they spend their time together in this colorfully illustrated book.
Each page has a picture to lure the audience. When Inez talks about catching a big fish, she includes a pictorial. The pond is ocean blue. The trees are forest green, the bicycles and tents are colorful, and each boy is so beautiful that I desired to be there to spend time with them. Also, each boy dresses differently. One wears blue pants, while the other is in shorts. Such unique features made me appreciate the book to the fullest. These are the features I admired.
The book is 30 pages, so kids will not fall asleep reading it had it been a lengthy read. The author employs children’s language; therefore, I did not encounter any hard words that might turn out problematic. When Jeremiah's mom took the boys for a shopping spree, their faces were delightful.
I discovered several things I detested. Consequently, I rate the book 3 out of 4 stars. Firstly, some pages had punctuation marks, while others did not. The kindle format of the work is even worse because terms are so closely squeezed that you would think three words are one. I recommend professional editing because reading it was a bit hectic. In conclusion, the ending left me at cliffhangers, as I expected more from the boys. I recommend Jeremiah’s camp out to kids between the ages of 4 and 8 years.
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I like how you've described the colors of the surroundings and children's clothes. Great review!
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