Review of Billy Jones's Father
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After reading the blurb in Amazon about the book I realized the premise is a very valid one. It surprised me, as I had no idea from the sample, what the story was leading up to. Wow. Parent's often push their children to excel in sports and promote competition. Gone is the natural ability and the fun. In is the pressure and dog-eat-dog mentality that can ruin lives. Such a good lesson. Great review written up as well.
Written in Contemporary Fiction while remaining a true story makes the story readable and the characters come to life.
I found the the word 'would' proliferated in the first few chapters I read.
After one of the chapters, I saw a footnote in italics with an asterisk. I spent time looking for the presence of the one in the text to check what the added point referred to. Footnotes like that will often refer to the sources of a quote. Any other point can often be added into the story at the time. I couldn't understand why this hadn't been done?
Another clarification which may have required research on the part of the Author; Scotty seemed to be showing symptoms of Bipolar Disorder. Maybe this is covered in more detail in a future chapter, but I don't think so. The author stated it had 'resulted' from the war background of Scotty. This is how it seems to someone who doesn't understand much about it and is relying on hearsay. That's ok. But to be accurate it needs to be that the war experiences 'triggered' the problem. The reason being that, a person already has the inherited predisposition and the bad experience triggers off the manifestation of the symptoms. Despite these observations, well done on BOTD. 5 out of 5 from me too.
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