Official Review: Kuimba by Priscilla B Shuler
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Official Review: Kuimba by Priscilla B Shuler

4 out of 4 stars
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It was on that last day of July 1914 that a blue-eyed boy was born. As the screams of childbirth soon died down in that rural shack, otherworldly yet musically sounding cries of the newborn baby filled the air. If his eyes’ color wasn’t unique enough for the offspring of an African-American couple, the series of unusual, miracle-like events starting from his birth made him undoubtedly not far from being heaven-sent. That was just the beginning.
A “surreal, soulful, and stirring” story and more, Kuimba by Priscilla B Shuler deserved 4 out of 4 stars.
For history enthusiasts, it may be quite a common knowledge that this fiction’s initial timelines also coincided with the start of the first world war. However, its theme was not about any of that period but of something better, especially for those like me who would prefer the brighter side. It should be noted that the Americans would only be joining the Allied forces around three years after the period. Thus, while the noise, toils, and atrocities had been brewing in other parts of the globe, this piece took its characters to a parallel realm of ethereal melodies for their ears and fantastic situations to spontaneously grace a number of their years instead.
Tenants at the time may still be experiencing what had been termed as a different kind of “slavery” as they were forced to give huge shares of their crops and harvests to their landlords. Such would defy what could be acceptable in our present times. Nevertheless, it was quite interesting to note how they acknowledged the reality that their situation was already a great improvement from what their ancestors had before the abolition of chattel slavery around half a century earlier. The storyline went a bit deeper than a mere chronicle of historical events as it also amply explored beliefs and matters of the soul. As the former slaves gained their freedom, their faith remained. Their resolve was bound to become even stronger against another form of enslavement – that from sin.
There were only three glaring editing or proofreading lapses that I spotted so far on the 178 pages of the electronic manuscript. Misspelled words and obliterated language proliferated in most of the pages. I think, though, that the dialogues’ lexical variations were even meant to reinforce more nuanced characterizations. The pace seemed slower than what I would have been more inclined to appreciate in a fictional work. Nonetheless, I think that what may have been another shortcoming turned out to be an advantage; the unhurried tempo also ultimately allowed the eventual ample development of the characters’ personalities and peculiarities as well as vividly depicted the setting’s details. Further, as compelling as any other account of metaphorical redemption was the second chance at life that the supposed antagonist and others like him (and the rest of us) could possibly have. Indeed, this was also a proverbial tale of hope for hopeless cases, glimmer beyond the dark clouds or light at the end of a tenebrous tunnel.
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This wouldn't be one that people would normally expect given the more well-known historical events around the period. However, you're perfectly right. The deviation didn't diminish but, instead, even highlighted this book's worth. I understand that we've got peculiar interests, though, and that's to be respected. Thank you for sharing your wise thoughts and kind words.kandscreeley wrote: ↑08 May 2019, 08:49 Though it takes place around WWI, it doesn't sound like it really has anything to do with it. This is its own story with its own merits. I'm not sure it'd be one I would enjoy, but your review was intriguing. Thanks so much.
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There are heaps of takeaways from this piece, indeed, that may also transcend what's merely cerebral. I do hope you'd read and find this piece as worthwhile as I did. Thank you as well for sharing your thoughts and kind words.
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Some would even say that slavery has not been perfectly eradicated as it only took different forms. What would matter more, though, is that we recognize and aim to resolve the issues. There's always a brighter side of things that could be seen or worked for, indeed. Thank you as well for sharing your insights and kind words.
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Exactly. I do hope you'd read and find it as worthwhile as I did. Thank you as well for sharing your thoughts.Rachel Lea wrote: ↑08 May 2019, 13:35 A very interesting premise for a story... I'm curious to see where exactly the author takes it. Thank you for your review!
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Same here. I'd rather not give up on anyone (including myself) that easily as far as possible, too. It's good that books like this one emphasize how it's not altogether far from happening.Bluebird03 wrote: ↑08 May 2019, 15:57 I love the idea of second chances. Your review was quite powerful and certainly did the book justice. Thank you for your insights!
Thank you as well for your insightful and kind comments!
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It would be quite normal to expect this piece to turn out as you've indicated. However, more often than not, out-of-the-box books have their way of coming closer to my heart and mind than the cookie-cutter ones could. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.Sahani Nimandra wrote: ↑09 May 2019, 05:16 Thank you for this intriguing piece! I was much awoken by the idea of a WWII periodic read as this, but was quite put out when the writing just edged which sounded like lagging.
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