Review of The Whims of War

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Whims of War" by Don R Sampen.]

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3 out of 4 stars

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The Whims of War is the story of Daniel Thompson, a merchant in the family business of the importation and sale of dry-food goods, amongst other interests. In the wake of the American Revolutionary War, he falls out with his father and brother over loyalties. Eventually, he brokers a deal with a warring faction to save his sister, Missy, from imprisonment. This decision leaves him deeply committed to one side of the war, contrary to his father's expectations and his initial inclinations. The ensuing tale is an original story of one man's struggle to do the right thing and the accompanying regrets and compensations of that decision. It tells of an individual who is compelled to discard his non-partisan sentiments when confronted with the urgency of protecting his family during unstable times and his struggles to maintain his business, provide for his family and guarantee their overall safety.

I found the story a delightful treat. The book presents a unique take on the American Revolutionary War. Where similar books and authors are tempted to consider the war in terms of scholastic endeavor and historical significance, Don R. Sampen presents a riveting tale of family, conflict and sacrifice. The novel effortlessly considers the source and sustenance of a man's loyalty to any cause, a subject matter often neglected and overlooked. It merits accolades for depth of content, exploration of material, pacing, character conflict and historical accuracy. The language used also reflected the difference in time and era whilst still being simple to understand.

Sub-themes like discrimination against native Indians and slavery were also tackled with tact, all while adding to the genuineness of the story, a remarkable feat. Also, the intermittent reversal to the trial (occurring in the present) while Daniel gives a detailed account of the happenings leading to his incarceration was very appreciated. It enabled a deeper understanding of the characters, their feelings, thoughts and motivations, thereby assisting the reader to connect on a multitude of levels. No other technique could have worked as well.

However, the novel would have significantly profited from more input from other characters, especially from a narrative standpoint. They appeared too passive at times, moving only in response to Daniel's stimuli, e.g. Elizabeth, Annie, Willie, Margaret, e.t.c. There were also some spelling errors, especially with the names of characters; aside from that, the novel suffers no deform.

The book is guaranteed enjoyment for individuals who enjoy adventure or historical books and is recommended as such. I rate it 3 out of 4. I deducted a star from my rating because of the negative aspect I mentioned. I couldn't deduct more stars because the book was a wonderful read.

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[maycherono91]

Such a great read, mostly because of the setting of the story. The review is beautiful too.

[MsH2k]

The ensuing tale is an original story of one man's struggle to do the right thing and the accompanying regrets and compensations of that decision.

What a beautiful summation of the conflict in this story. With the multifaceted backdrop of the American Revolutionary War, this book sounds like interesting read.

Thank you for your lovely review and recommendation!

[Diana Lowery]

I like that the book is from a different point of view. Your review was very informative. I hope that the errors you mentioned get corrected.

[ThankGod Onyishi]

I love how the author discusses this in a brand new way. Looking at things from other perspectives has always been a delight.

[Natalie Sheph]

Historical books are always interesting to read, and along with being informative, the elements of romance add an artistic touch to them. Nice review!