Review of Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight" by Robert Murray.]
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This book, Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight by Robert Murray, is the third installment in the "Camelot Chronicles" series. It starts with the story of King Elias, who, having earned the unquestionable obedience and devotion of his swordsmen by defeating any opposing troop that dared come their way, is now expected to find a woman who would be his wife and queen. The king sought an omen, a sign from God. Would it be Belinda, or would it be Rosamond, who is already betrothed to his friend? Who would look, cook, and craft a poem as he desired? Whose familiar wisdom and affection would remain even when she's grown rotund? Find out about his dilemma and the different stories of Camelot in this book.

One of the positive sides of the book is that the author made skillful use of literary devices in his work. For instance, on page 9, there was an allegory to the story of David and Beersheba: I do love Bel', and I fear a David May rise in me, and within my breast win. I also spotted some other devices, like alliteration. In addition, I noticed a rhyming pattern most of the time. For instance, in the beginning, it was an ABAB pattern. The narrator told a story that became really interesting as the book progressed.

The issue I had was in the transition from one story to another. I felt the way the narrator jumped from one story to another would leave a reader a bit confused as to what was happening at each point. I had to go back at intervals. This book is a long, continuous read with no pauses and very quick transitions.

While deciding my final rating, I am convinced this is a five-star book. Therefore, I rate this book five out of five stars. This book has no errors. The author's use of literary devices also spiced things up. The negative aspect slowed down my appreciation of the book at first, but I don't think it's compelling enough to take away a star from my rating.

I think those who enjoy narrative poetry would love this book. This book is 190 pages long, and like I mentioned earlier, it's in continuous form without breaks. I would also recommend it to readers who love ballads.

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Post by Anas Ahmed khan 1 »

Thank you for sharing your review of "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight" by Robert Murray. It's great to hear that the author skillfully employed literary devices, such as allegory, alliteration, and rhyme patterns, to enhance the storytelling. These elements can indeed add depth and richness to a narrative.

Your observation about the transitions between different stories in the book is valuable feedback. A smooth flow and clear transitions are important for a reader's engagement and understanding. It's understandable that abrupt shifts can be disorienting. The need to backtrack at times can interrupt the reading experience.

Overall, your review offers both praise and constructive feedback, which is helpful for potential readers and the author. It's a well-balanced evaluation of the book's strengths and areas where it might improve. Thank you for your thoughtful analysis. Your insights will undoubtedly aid others in deciding whether to explore this installment in the "Camelot Chronicles" series.
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I am intrigued by the continuous form of the book, and the literary devices mentioned. I am not sure though if it would be the book for me since the storyline, a king having to find his queen, is not so much my taste.
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"Engaging and insightful! This review eloquently captures the essence of 'Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight,' highlighting its literary strengths and acknowledging minor transitions. A compelling recommendation for fans of narrative poetry and ballads. Well done!"
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The book appears to take a unique approach to reviving interest in Arthurian legends. It seems to be ideal for those who like narrative poetry and medieval times.
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This review of "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight" by Robert Murray highlights several positive aspects of the book. The reviewer commends the author's skillful use of literary devices, such as allegory, alliteration, and consistent rhyming patterns, which enrich the storytelling experience. They also acknowledge the intriguing narrative that unfolds throughout the book, capturing the reader's interest as it progresses.

Additionally, the reviewer provides constructive feedback regarding the transitions between different storylines, noting that it could sometimes be confusing for readers. Despite this minor issue, they ultimately rate the book a perfect five out of five stars, emphasizing its overall quality and the absence of errors.

It's evident that the reviewer appreciates the unique qualities of this narrative poetry and recommends it to readers who enjoy such storytelling styles. They also suggest it to fans of ballads, acknowledging its continuous format and immersive storytelling.

Overall, this review provides valuable insights for potential readers while expressing appreciation for the author's craftsmanship. Thank you to the reviewer for their thoughtful analysis and recommendation of "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight."
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Since childhood, I've always loved stories about medieval battles. I also enjoy books that use a lot of figurative language to enrich my language skills. I look forward to plot twists and unexpected stories in this book. Thank you for writing the review. :D
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This book centres on authorities, their high ranks with all the due respect accorded. Whilst torn between the impact of their decisions to the world and their unquestionable self relief during tuff times. "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight" helps us see the struggles those in authority undergo beyond their paradise stay.
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Smooth transitions can really help create an immersive reading experience. I'm not much into poetry but I think it's the appropriate genre to present a Camelot story.
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The book sounds interesting. It starts with the story of King Elias, who, having earned the unquestionable obedience and devotion of his swordsmen by defeating any opposing troop that dared come their way, is now expected to find a woman who would be his wife and queen.
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I do like a story that involves a major decision by the main character. Books about this time period, however, don’t seem to hold my interest for long. Knights and kings are just not what I look for in a book. I’m glad that this type of literature is here for those that do, though. Congratulations on BOTD!
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This book, Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight by Robert Murray, is the third installment in the "Camelot Chronicles" series. It starts with the story of King Elias, who, having earned the unquestionable obedience and devotion of his swordsmen by defeating any opposing troop that dared come their way, is now expected to find a woman who would be his wife and queen.
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This book, Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight by Robert Murray, is the third installment in the "Camelot Chronicles" series. It starts with the story of King Elias, who, having earned the unquestionable obedience and devotion of his swordsmen by defeating any opposing troop that dared come their way, is now expected to find a woman who would be his wife and queen. The review is insightful.
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Dive into the dilemmas of Camelot in 'Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight' by Robert Murray. A poetic journey in the 'Camelot Chronicles' series, where allegory and rhyme enrich the legendary tales. Congratulations on being BOTD!
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This comprehensive review of "Battle Ballad of the Royal Knight" adeptly highlights its literary strengths and minor shortcomings, offering valuable insights for potential readers. Thank you for your great review! Congratulations on being BOTD!
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