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Review of Secondary Worlds

Posted: 09 Dec 2024, 10:50
by Catherine Sweet
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Secondary Worlds" by Aaron Gedaliah.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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Secondary Worlds by Aaron Gedaliah is a poetry book that explores aspects of an alternative world. Gedaliah lives in Haight-Ashbury, a district of San Francisco and has written more poetry since retirement. His first book, The False God's Lullaby, was published in late 2023.

Gedaliah explains in the preface that the book's title was inspired by WH Auden describing works of art as secondary worlds. Gedaliah has focused on secondary worlds and the human condition for this poetry collection. His poems explore the creation of imaginary worlds that enable escape from the burden of the real world. Deeper subjects are the primary focus, but there are lighter moments of irony and humour.

I found some of the poems in the section The Shadow of Evil to be particularly powerful. Two of the poems made a lasting impression on me. Yom Ha Shoa reflects on growing up as a Jewish boy, the dark shadows created by prejudice and the sorrow when remembering the victims of the Holocaust. After reading this poem, I continued to think about it for some time. Another poem in this section is Elegy for Maria Trinidad, a sad and lyrical poem about a young girl who died in a concentration camp. This poem evoked feelings that lingered in my mind long after I had read it. Still in this section, there is The God Game, which takes a different stance and features the voice of a militant Christian who rejects anyone different and fights against those who question the place of religion in our lives.

Gedaliah brings humour into some of his poems, such as Curmudgeon's Battle Cry 2025! which is an outraged but humorous look at the indignities of modern culture. The last section has a poem called Awake at 4 am, a haunting poem in which the poet is visited by his late grandmother in his dreams. Makandura was the last poem and it evoked the comfort and beauty of experiencing a different culture.

Secondary Worlds would appeal to readers who enjoy poetry that explores the human condition and questions the meaning of life. Although I enjoyed reading the humorous poems in Joy of Ranting, they didn't evoke the strength of feeling that some of the more serious poems did. I don't think I will read them again, but I will revisit some of the others. With this in mind, I award the book 4 out of 5 stars.

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Re: Review of Secondary Worlds

Posted: 25 Dec 2024, 06:34
by Naimah Agboluaje
Review: Secondary Worlds by Aaron Gedaliah appears to be a compelling poetry book that delves into the depths of alternative worlds and the complexities of the human experience. The reviewer praises the powerful and thought-provoking nature of Gedaliah's poems, particularly in sections like "The Shadow of Evil." They highlight the emotional impact of poems like "Yom Ha Shoa" and "Elegy for Maria Trinidad," which address dark historical events and prejudice. The inclusion of lighter moments of humor adds depth and variation to the collection. However, the reviewer mentions that the humorous poems didn't resonate as strongly as the serious ones. Overall, the reviewer rates the book 4 out of 5, making it a highly recommended read for those who enjoy poetry exploring the human condition and life's meaning. Intricate plot, expertly woven and layered.

Re: Review of Secondary Worlds

Posted: 08 Jan 2025, 08:30
by Joe Alex 2
The collection seems to explore a mix of deep reflections and lighter moments, particularly through its exploration of secondary worlds and the human condition. Some of the more serious poems appear to evoke strong, lingering emotions, especially those dealing with historical and personal themes like the Holocaust. The humor in some poems offers a refreshing contrast, but it seems that the more poignant pieces left a lasting impact. Given this mix, I might consider reading it, especially if I’m in the mood for something that prompts deep thought and introspection.