Ants: A Letter to the Landlord

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Lex22
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Re: Ants: A Letter to the Landlord

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Good indirect letter for those who are in position and power. I enjoyed reading it.
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It was incredibly funny. Thanks for sharing.
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This was a really enjoyable read, a creative use of a letter format. Keep up the good work!
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I love it! What a beautiful way to get the landlord's attention, so often it is only the money they worry about!
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Cute story. Thanks for sharing.
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What a witty story of a letter to the neglectful landlord. The ants are clearly having a better time there than the tenant. I would love to see more stories like this in the forums.
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