6 Word Story

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Tehilah27 wrote: ↑23 May 2018, 07:26 Running father, laughing mother, burning car
I want to read the rest of this story as soon as possible!

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The cat became sad when the mouse escaped.

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Interesting effect! I started to feel bad for the cat even though the mouse is the "protagonist."
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Crying together, laughing together, dying together
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Quiet, peaceful, a dead bird. Ah one sentence wonders.. I made that up. My sister used to own a white parrot that made the sound of a fire alarm with a dead battery...lol..true story...also said carbon monoxide...lol...I hated that bird!
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Queen Arthur wrote: ↑26 Feb 2019, 19:36 I came, I saw, I conquered.

Okay...that's NOT original. 😆
Good one! It does tell a story in 6 words. Someone else's six words, but six words nonetheless!! Quotes can be good...
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Swore eternal love. He was lying.

Love this tiny little 6 words stories :)
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Mana_Hale wrote: ↑07 Apr 2018, 15:29
CambaReviewer wrote: ↑04 Apr 2018, 12:15 This could be a writing prompt. Nice. You have created images in my head with six words. Bravo!
Thanks! I love working with super short stories like this, I find it helps writers of all experience levels realize how little is truly necessary to make a good story :)
I agree, this can make for such an entertaining writing exercise!
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I love this idea of this writing prompt.....

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Missing person. A letter. Awful News.
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I loved him, he loved another.
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I wanted a baby, he didn't.
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Mana_Hale wrote: ↑02 Apr 2018, 21:39 The mouse evaded the starving cat.
Loved it!
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Then second mouse gets the cheese.
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Well, it's very nice. Maybe I can add input when you start writing it.
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