Athazagoraphobia

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Caleb Afton
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Re: Athazagoraphobia

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What a twist! The story was intriguing, it kept me captivated the entire time. There were enough details given so that I felt like I was in the main character's shoes. Loved it.
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Fascinating. Good job
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This is a good piece of writing, but the plot has me confused as well. I wonder if there is more and I am looking forward to how far this goes and its results.
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Emi_Review wrote: 07 Sep 2018, 17:08
erastusmunyasia wrote: 07 Sep 2018, 10:04 First story I ever read in this site and was totally great.Reminds me of a movie i loved, "50 first dates",directed by Peter Segal.I look forward to reading more of your stories.You are clearly gifted.
Thank you so much! I know that movie! I didn't even think about it when I wrote this but I totally see the connection. I don't want to give too much away but the memory loss in this story is for a different reason 😁
Now I want to know the reason! Please continue this story. The point that grabbed me was when she spots two toothbrushes - brilliant!
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