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Janelove
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Thirst For Betterment :!:

"My name is Jovial. I don't know how to or what to use in describing myself, but one phrase I'd use is 'I'm a fool'. At least, that's what my father, mother, brother and sisters have always identified me with.
I mean, what do you have to say for a girl who got raped at the age of 12 and before age 16 she had known over 3 dozens of men.
What do you have to say about a girl who grew amidst severe battering by poor, frustrated parents and has learned life the hard way;no single regards for parents.
What else do you have to say for a girl who grew in hunger and poverty and took to taking what's not hers and has even lost counts of her many theft escapeds
What eventually do you have to say about a girl who while finding solace, ran into the hands of a fellow girl with whom she unwillingly shared erogenous passions.
This girl is promiscuous, she is heartless and disrespectful, she steals, she is not God fearing (almost an agnostic), she's a lesbian, she is uneducated and eventually a very big fool!!!

But guess what?. I am ready to change, ready to turn a new leaf and ready to be human again"
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This seems to me like more of a confession than a story. It's powerful. And a little heart-breaking too.
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Post by DC Brown »

What a survivor!! You've made my heart go out to young Jovial.
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