How day and night came to be

Use this forum to post short stories that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links.
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Re: How day and night came to be

Post by mddodgen »

Your wonderful story brings back memories from my childhood. My uncle, Frank Roanhorse , often shared stories with me that were similar to this style. I was always enchanted with the Navajo legends
he spun so expertly while we sat next to a campfire. Thank you for bringing back cherished childhood memories.
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Captivating. Good job!
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Post by Cwaganagwa Dorothy »

Your story is very interesting and would be an awesome read for children and lovers of fantasies. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up for you and an applause.
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Absolutely beautiful, I don't think I'm ever going to look at sunflowers the same way again:-)
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Post by Fayehobbs231680 »

Loved this story,,,complex, yet so simplistic..detailed and easy to visualize..my question is..is this what happens every night?
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Well done. I particularly love the personification of the sun and the moon. Vividly described.
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