One liner embarrassing story"

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Aishwarya Chhabra
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One liner embarrassing story"

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I am, sitting in the bathroom, going to release my bladder and it happens, but oh no it in fact feels wet in my pants coz I was ,oops, sleeping....
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Post by Ambermariiie »

Very funny its realistic.
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Your title got my attention! Suggestion, the commas need editing. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Amanda Brown 11 »

🤣🤣 This was hilarious! I wish there were other embarrassing stories.
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When I dream about peeing and wake up, I am always terified that I have urinated on myself.
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Post by Hussein21 »

Very funny 😅 this all happened to us all when we were kids, especially after rough plays
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So funny, you caught my attention and I had a good laugh :)
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Oh, my gosh! That's funny, yet embarrassing.
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Post by SNEHA GOYAL 2 »

That's really embarrassing but nature's call can't be controlled.
But the punctuation marks need to handled.
Also the title has a set of inverted commas, which is not necessary and doesn't show perfection.
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