Romantic

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Saraion
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Romantic

Post by Saraion »

BE SLOW

Be slow,slow and steady
Time flies
You and I will stay
Behind these lonely alleys
Whether you like it or not
You and I are traveling
Behind this homeland
Do not leave me alone
Comrades of my moments
Come stay with me for ever
Every where and at any moment
My being makes sense to you
For ever
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Tobewankenobe
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Post by Tobewankenobe »

I like this a lot. It constructs a personalized view of romance that elicits both a sense of travel and hidden trysts in "lonely alleys" and "behind this homeland."
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