Aim High!

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Aim High!

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I wrote this poem in honor of my father and two brothers who are in the Air Force and the whole force of the Air Force! What the military does is so important and we should never forget it!

Aim high, Airmen!
For you have been given wings to fly.
Don't clip the feathers with which you'll soar,
For you are the noblest to the core.
You know no obstacle you can not beat
For you carry the sword of un-defeat.
You wield the shield of strength and pride
For you courage can not be grounded, so take to the skies!
Aim high, Airmen!
Fly higher, Airmen!
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A very patriotic poem. The guardians of our skies, and our liberties with it, as democracy and our way of life as we know it, is safeguarded. The way security stands, airmen are the first line of defense against aggressors.
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Wow, what a lovely poem! I wish everyone could read this. (I think in the 15th line, can not should be written as one single word. If we try reading out aloud, it helps us to know how the words should be written. I tried reading it aloud and 'cannot' works much better).
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Sumansona1344 wrote: 30 May 2020, 05:27 Wow, what a lovely poem! I wish everyone could read this. (I think in the 15th line, can not should be written as one single word. If we try reading out aloud, it helps us to know how the words should be written. I tried reading it aloud and 'cannot' works much better).
Oh, okay. Thanks! Except...I'm not sure how to fix it... :D
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 30 May 2020, 02:25 A very patriotic poem. The guardians of our skies, and our liberties with it, as democracy and our way of life as we know it, is safeguarded. The way security stands, airmen are the first line of defense against aggressors.
Definitely! Throughout all the years of America, the military was there every step of the way. We wouldn't be where we are today without the soldiers who laid down their lives to give us a free country. That is why we need to honor them and remember to take care of America. Not only our free soil, but also our governors, politicians, and presidents. We need to learn to discern who and what is good for America and what will make her grow into something that beautiful! :D
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