God's Pair

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Bobpower
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God's Pair

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Together we’ve known the bad and the good
Our life together I would not change if I could

Our hearts have bonded with love and yes fate
God has corralled us together then open the gate

In the beginning, we walked, but now we can run
We once were alone, but now we are one

I’ll never be afraid as long as there is you
The storm we’ll endure we’ll always get through

Just look at our lives how much we have changed
It’s something that God has touched and arranged

Because I am human, I often feel sorrow
When adversity strikes like the point of an arrow

I know it won’t hurt me with the love that we share
Thank God for his wisdom in making us a pair
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This is so sweet! I love it! However, the punctuation in this is a little messed up. Although, I am not the grammar expert. Just saying.
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